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President Bush.
There was a quake in the Middle East, and instead of mentionin the problem
All the broadcaster thought of was, “hopefully it got Bin Laden”
Then when God sends caution in the wind to New Orleans, the truth is
Only thing that the news gives two shits about is the black people lootin
Yea, there were whites too that would, but that aint the sight that they took
Cause whether you like it or not, America still dresses in white with a hood
And despite what they could, would come to show in a movement
When another hurricane came with pain thrown at Houston
Then, all the troops went... and I wonder why
I know it’s the presidents state, but I’ll put that aside
I mean, c’mon guys – we knew what to be expecting right?
Or was it this time responsibility and vacation wouldn’t collide
Osama Bin Laden, Saddam Hussein, along with everybody we fight...
Why is it that President Bush gets along with everybody that’s white?
I feel like my pride is faceless, and with time, its nameless
Face it, you aint gotta look in their faces to realize they’re racist
I cant take it, and neither should you... so what I’m suggestin
Is EVERYBODY control the fate of our countries next election
And help us be respected again, instead of bashing the weak
And get America where it should be, back on its feet.
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Ahaha, this is funny on a serious level, but also on a sad level because it's so fucking true.
Though the line about him getting along with everyone that's white kinda hits me as a :homo: aka Kanye look. Not that it matters, on the level of seriousness you were on point. Good job, Jay. Though the topic is played, everybody bitches about his ass, you got it right about the elections, what the fuck is wrong with america? - you have us asking when we read. Nice job.
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=241510
^ hit it =)
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Word^^reminds me of Kanye Kinda...This was really good..I give you props
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yo that should was some good shit..you got soem talent man keep up[ the good work....
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ryte when i seen da topic, i knew erythang it wuz gon say dogg, i feel u werd fer werd, n some, daz some treal chopz nigga.... stay up
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Good stuff. I really feel the topic (what the fuck was America thinking reelecting him), and your structure was good. Only a few multis and the rhymes weren't too complicated, but it flowed well and got the point across. 7.5/10
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i feel the topic, a little played, but dope, only multies needed incresement, otheriwse nice drop flowed well and was consistent, rhye scheme was also complex... peep "prelude to armageeddon" link in my sigg