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Ripping Apart Emotions
Ripping Apart Emotions
Its the outside thats calm,Insides are gettin eatin alive.
Like maggots growing in your body,gettin bigger turning into flys.
Face and eyes stiff dont show know fear.
But when things grow bigger they will shed many tears.
Drilling a gaint drill into the center of the core.
Over feeling a water balloon until it cant hold no more.
When water balloons cant hold no more they seem to explode.
When reaching the center of the core the earth will seem to go.
Going outrageous, Emotions are contageous.
Watching somebody cry, you fall into crying stages.
Breaking an arm and the bone is soon to heal.
Making a scarr and the memory shall never seal.
Theirs just so many shots a body can take befor somebody dies.
Theirs just so many shots a heart can take befor somebody doesnt wanna try.
Feelings and emotions is what everybodys cursed with.
Its just the criticism you let in your body can make you feel worthless.(ImPossible)
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So, what does it take to get some feed back in this place!!!
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I think that this poem was really written..... just for the soul purpose of writing something. To me it was extremely monotone. It also porvided no imagery. This might just be one of your off-beat poems -I don't know I haven't been around in a while- but it seems to me that you just felt like writing something but the topic served no emotional meaning to you...
Keep Droppin
Elevate
....bless
~*UnO*~
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i rly felt the emotion in this poem, i can relate, i feel tht way a lot.
"Feelings and emotions is what everybodys cursed with.
Its just the criticism you let in your body can make you feel worthless."
especialy liked tht line coz rythmicaly it ended the poem rly well.
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thanks schuey, ya this poem either relates to somebody or doesnt,
