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My Dad And I
The Shouts growing Louder And Louder, My Blood Boiling//
What Am I Gonna Do While Hes In The Corner Recoiling//
Thoughts Running Through My Head Make Me Wanna Kill//
But I Aint Got the Heart, I Aint The Type To Spill//
Especially Not When Its The Man Who Gave Me My Life//
So Intead Of Him People Gone Feel The Pain of My Knife//
Stress Builds Up Pressure Draws Fonder Pains Comin To Me//
I Scream Out Fuck Off As I Collapse Right At His Feet//
Got Me Feelin Like I Been Jumped Out On The Street//
The Room Goes Silent But Thoughts Grow Louder To Me//
As I Rise To My Feet Im Shaken To See All The Blood//
My Dad Lying There Unconcious, His Shirt Is Undone//
Shit Turned Quickly To Violence Cant It Turn Into Fun//
But That'LL Never Now Happen The Hurtings Been Done//
It Was Then And There That I Ran To The Road And Stood//
I Walked Over To The Car And I Popped Open The Hood//
Started The Engine And I Got Away As Quick As I Could//
Thought I Knew Life, But Im Just A Stick In The Woods//
Worlds So Big No Way I Could Have Comprohended It All//
My Life Was At The Top And Now Im Just Lettin It Fall//
And I Aint Got No Parachute To Soften The Blows I Incur//
Reached The City Limits And New Hope's What I Had Heard//
I'd Been Granted A Second Chance At Living My Life Right//
Time Say Goodbye To The Streets And bye To The Drive Bys//
I Just Found It Hard To Get Over This Life That I'd Spent//
Living a Happy Life Of Content, Make Believe and Pretend//
Started To break Down Not Having My Father By My Side//
I Felt Just Like Bonnie Living In A Life Witout Clyde//
Roaming The Country Without Having Any Meaning At All//
If The Earth's So Big Why Are Human Beings So Small//
Day After Day I Felt Like My Life Was Losing Its Point//
As Useless As A Knife After Someone Loosened The Joint//
So Went To The Corner Store And Purchased Me A New Mack//
Had One Bullet, Spoke To My Body And Took The Truce Back//
Sent A Shot Straight To My Skull It Was An Instant Death//
I Would Told You More But I Cant Remember It In Depth//
I Enter The Gates And Saw The Festivities Only To Realise//
My Father Isnt There His Murder I Hadnt See In My Real Eyes//
It Was All A Dream, Ran Away From Home Just Hours Too Soon//
Cant Believe It Happened Id Left This World Years Too Soon//
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Ahhh, this was an okay drop it could have been alot better...structure was good but next time dont end your lines with // makes it looks herbish.. Wordplay and vocabulary was very simple...didnt really impress me , Feeling and emotions were decent , felt it could have been better but overall decent drop
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just posting........................................
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