explicitot (0-0) vs. vafinest (0-0)

LLL Jr. Week II

Rules

10-20 lines, agree with your opponent during check ins. otherwise match whoever drops first.

check ins are due this wednesday, if you don't check in you'll lose two votes automatically.

no recycling from rb. [unless it's from a no show]
no feeding. [you lose two votes for every line you feed]

you must vote on four battles and leave links. you will lose two votes for every missing link. you can't vote on a no show battle and use it for your link either.

verses are due this friday @ midnight pacific. your opponent must agree if you want an extension, and it can be no longer than 24 hours.

no show and you're gone. y'all better bring it.

check check 12 lines

agreed...check

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3431645

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247385

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3431684

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=1#post3431694

theres the links...


yo dude im not tryna expose you, but everybody knows you lame
Artistic Syndicates, ya title and the hoes' you game..
this faggots ugly, check his bars and get disturbed worse..
..than his family in norfolk who choked on his first verse
theres not a chance in hell you'd be LL, i can prove it
Va's the type to spit feminem and lose in the music
soon to comsume him..im sick of your topicals, forget the textin
this guys topics are worse than forgetin to drop after the checkin
i'd think you got it in you...but for some reason ..
you hold back..n now get sonned in one season.
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you see kid, this league wasnt for herb's..you 'll get smoked
stick to these guys...
....vafinest vs supersikwitit (200 posts to vote)

lets do this


how can this kid be "twizteds bodyguard",when he can't defend himself
cuz if text battling was like war,you might as well kill yourself
cuz you ain't an "anticipated artist",you can't draw pictures with your words you don't even got a "sixth sense",even if you were a computer nerd
well you ain't a "hood angel",cuz your rhymes ain't that hood
you sound like a church boy,that probably can't even sing good
this kid better get it through his head,that he'll never be a legend
cuz half of the punches that hes brings,are played out like air jordans
so he better learn the first time,that text battling is not school
cuz he will have so many F's,like he was a dumb fool
so let me put this to an end,cuz this kid is so fake
cuz even if rap was like baking,he wouldn't be able to make the cake

uppin this for some votes

VA
so let me put this to an end,cuz this kid is so fake
cuz even if rap was like baking,he wouldn't be able to make the cake

Pretty bad verse, ur punches need to be worded better and ur rhymescheme was all messed, like legend doesnt rhyme with Jordan

Explicitot
you see kid, this league wasnt for herb's..you 'll get smoked
stick to these guys...
....vafinest vs supersikwitit (200 posts to vote)

ur punches were better than VA's but u didnt stay that consistent, I hope u can do better next week :thumbup:

V/ Explicitot for better punching and wording, keep working u guys

wow only nice line was the 200 post joint, that slayed va imo.

no good shit from va. word of advice, focus on sum wit, work on setups as well.

vote twizted's bodyguard

i hate you both. neither of the verses were very entertaining but im gonna give this to explicitot for coming less wack. work on your punches yall

you see kid, this league wasnt for herb's..you 'll get smoked
stick to these guys...
....vafinest vs supersikwitit (200 posts to vote)

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Nothing

Vote Twizteds bodygaurd

weak battle...expliciot won wit better flow 'n punches
va homie u did good but ya shit was all payed though
keep tryin ya style is good just put in more vocab
'n advance punches 'n mettas den you'll be good

v/twizted bodygaurd

Both Verses were pretty trashy, had some good stuff there and out but explicitot took this one

V/ Explicitot

Rofl, The posts line


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not shit va.

V. Ex