Exact a.k.a. Little R vs. M.O.U.S.E.

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[Intro]
I take risks? Huh? What can I say?
..................I'm not a really luck guy,
But every vet has his red letter day,



The niggah that swiped the cheese? Please, that's a cliche,
M.O.U.S.E your signature was often overlooked anyway,
Thinking you went out on a limb to start a crew,
Don't worry, sucking cocks for favors won't count as rondezvous,
Call yourself a vet? Why don't enroll in one of the leagues?
Nah, that'll be like a sequel, M.O.U.S.E. Under Siege,
Half your roster aborted the mission because it was innactive,
And to think, just three weeks ago Children of the Atom looked attractive,
Please, it's impossible for half your roster to elevate,
Becuase most votes go against you,
.........................Don't worry, "No hate"

No intro for this clown, gassed nigga kno im superb
Cause i Ex-Act like a critic watchin "You Got Served"
Wordplay is sick punches naaa nigga dey still suck ass
........Cause i "Defi-Ant Lyricists" wit a magnifyin glass
Tyrone Biggums ass nigga.......thats clear to the folks
Slept in Crack mumblin words..........sayin "Am I Dope"
Ya sig poposterous and most kno.......a sign of defeat
Playin wit legends....ha i guess he playin N.B.A. street
Im passin out cards for elevation go check out the feature
Maybe one day youll elevate......to the sole on my sneaker

The niggah that swiped the cheese? Please, that's a cliche,
M.O.U.S.E your signature was often overlooked anyway,
O.K FUNNY BUT ON REAL PUNCH
Thinking you went out on a limb to start a crew,
Don't worry, sucking cocks for favors won't count as rondezvous,
FUNNY GOOD PUNCH
Call yourself a vet? Why don't enroll in one of the leagues?
Nah, that'll be like a sequel, M.O.U.S.E. Under Siege,
NOPE A FILLER
Half your roster aborted the mission because it was innactive,
And to think, just three weeks ago Children of the Atom looked attractive,
ANOTHER FILLER
Please, it's impossible for half your roster to elevate,
Becuase most votes go against you,
.........................Don't worry, "No hate"
NICE CLOSER, AN IIGHT VERSE,


VS.



No intro for this clown, gassed nigga kno im superb
Cause i Ex-Act like a critic watchin "You Got Served"
NAHH NOT A GOOD OPENER
Wordplay is sick punches naaa nigga dey still suck ass
........Cause i "Defi-Ant Lyricists" wit a magnifyin glass
NICE PUNCH
Tyrone Biggums ass nigga.......thats clear to the folks
Slept in Crack mumblin words..........sayin "Am I Dope"
O.K NICE 1ST LINE PUNCH WASNT THAT GOOD
Ya sig poposterous and most kno.......a sign of defeat
Playin wit legends....ha i guess he playin N.B.A. street
PFFT DUMB FUNNY JUS A FUNNY FILLER
Im passin out cards for elevation go check out the feature
Maybe one day youll elevate......to the sole on my sneaker
NAHHH A FILLER A SOSO VERSE

V//EXACT FOR AN OVERALL BETTER VERSE BETTER PUNCHES AND WORDPLAY
WAS BETTER

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uppin3 damn niggas sleepin......

I take risks? Huh? What can I say?
..................I'm not a really luck guy,
But every vet has his red letter day,



The niggah that swiped the cheese? Please, that's a cliche,
M.O.U.S.E your signature was often overlooked anyway,
koo
Thinking you went out on a limb to start a crew,
Don't worry, sucking cocks for favors won't count as rondezvous,
nice
Call yourself a vet? Why don't enroll in one of the leagues?
Nah, that'll be like a sequel, M.O.U.S.E. Under Siege,
not really
Half your roster aborted the mission because it was innactive,
And to think, just three weeks ago Children of the Atom looked attractive,
OUCH!
Please, it's impossible for half your roster to elevate,
Becuase most votes go against you,
.........................Don't worry, "No hate"
Personal like hell




No intro for this clown, gassed nigga kno im superb
Cause i Ex-Act like a critic watchin "You Got Served"
9/10
Wordplay is sick punches naaa nigga dey still suck ass
........Cause i "Defi-Ant Lyricists" wit a magnifyin glass
good wordplay
Tyrone Biggums ass nigga.......thats clear to the folks
Slept in Crack mumblin words..........sayin "Am I Dope"
nice
Ya sig poposterous and most kno.......a sign of defeat
Playin wit legends....ha i guess he playin N.B.A. street
aight
Im passin out cards for elevation go check out the feature
Maybe one day youll elevate......to the sole on my sneaker
OUCH!

well out of honesty this in my opinion barely goes 2 exact only because all his lines were punches and Mouse had that one filler if it wasn't 4 tha filler it would've went ta mouse

V/Exact

Exact had real good personals, ok flow, ok structure, but i seen better from exact
7/10

mouse ok punches, good word, str8 flow, but better then ExacT. sturcture was'nt that great
8/10

vote/ mouse

V/ Exact.... Better flow and punches... i would actually say Mouse got hit pretty hard.

Upping for votes yo.

Damn, wordplay here was tight yo, Exact hit a punch on nearly every line, although some were weak, like the rondevous one, some good personals in there from exact though, liked em... mouse had a good verse good wordplay good punches but some were straight corny... mainly the opening and closer... overall better verse goes to exact

v//exact

yo hit this up with honest votes: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=247930

Thanks man.

Upping.