blackangel vs. lifestyle

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u can spit first since i changed the topic for ya=)

Look bitch yous oxymoron not knowin if ya wanna be good or evil
But i do know one the thing ya rhymes are old and played.....shit der midevil
See ya know bitch dat me and you are different im sick wit da flow
I aint outkast bitch but srop down and give me da love below
I peeped ya otha battles and most of ya lines was stretched
And besides from dat dey we etched skecthed and farfetched
See check da wordplay i have and dry to learn
Plus if ya style is weak ill merk ya and leave no point of return
So basically dont take it personal dat i just merked ya in da minimum lines needed
So i guess im somewhat like a herd of elephants da way ya just got stampeded

easy bitch

Revised Edition

Look bitch yous a oxymoron not knowin if ya wanna be good or evil
But i do know one the thing ya rhymes are old and played.....shit der midevil
See ya know bitch dat me and you are different im sick wit da flow
I aint outkast bitch but drop down and give me da love below
I peeped ya otha battles and most of ya lines was stretched
And besides from dat dey we etched skecthed and farfetched
See check da wordplay i have and try to learn
Plus if ya style is weak ill merk ya and leave no point of return
So basically dont take it personal dat i just merked ya in da minimum lines needed
So i guess im somewhat like a herd of elephants da way ya just got stampeded

look i my be a girl but i can run the MILE
besides i would neva show ya the love below cuz i think u should chang ya LIFESTYL
I'll leave ya facless comin to this BATTLE
as you can tell this mans rymes make him sound like hes from SEATTLE
all im hearin from ya raps are basicly the SAME
sounds like this nigga's still needs to learn how to play the GAME
cuz if ya step into a females turf and act like that ya gonna feel PAIN
you sound like u treat ladies with no RESPECT
bitch im ya pimp and i came to COLLECT
i have more power since im an ANGEL
dam have ya seen ya self lately you look like OLD CHRIS CRINGEL
ya you heard me RIGHT
and if ya want to lose another battle rematch me TOMORROWNIGHT.

shit if i lose its not my fualt i do better when im topic battle =)

blackangel you kinda just went with shit you'd throw in audio. Maybe would be good for a freestyle battle diss. But... come on, a WRITTEN text verse? Big no no. Lifestyl just won with not being as wack... and knowing how to drop text more like elites. Though, the punches lacked a lot of creativity and wording, and were hardly punches... He still took it.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=248118

v/ - Life style. Vote on that ^

^upiin

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See ya know bitch dat me and you are different im sick wit da flow
I aint outkast bitch but drop down and give me da love below

vs.

none

though that shit was played it was the only good line in this battle.

v/ life style for better structure and punch

blackangel keep trying ma u gonna elevate

aight thanks im out=)

Punches-none
structure- life
personals- life
creativity-none
vocab-none

v/ LIfe styles

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