Fucked Up Faggots

This about some...fuckin dickheads from my school, this shit started after i got socked in the mouth, and since then we ain't been friends

Fucked up faggots/

This verse’s about you Godwin/
You and your mother fucking pin/
You boast about you having a PSP/
You say more fucked up shit than Nas and Jay Z/
You started to piss me off earlier this year/
I took it for a month, and then I said one thing about you shopping at Ikea/
You couldn’t take it, I was only messing/
Saying shit about you passing tests guessing/
You think you are hard but the only time/
You were hard was when you were watching gay porn – that should be a crime/
Because it is just simply very gay/
I’ll shoot you with my loaded AK/
47, 9mm, and remote mine/
At the same time, and just say that they ain’t mine/
Everything you say is controversial/
And stupid like a McDonalds ad commercial/
Talking about McDonalds, you’re like a meal with low fat/
You’re injected in fat, wearing a red hat/
You nicked off of the chinky woman/
And yes believe it – you’re fatter than Paul ‘Bunyan’/
Rosenberg. You’re so fat you’re quiet/
You’re so quiet you’re tired/
Now if you can understand why I’m doing this shit/
Send me them same drugs as you’re popping, then you’ll be doing your bit/
For the community/
Well, for me, for my one and every opportunity/
Godwin have you ever heard of this website (scrawling on paper)/
No, thought so, cos it’s lesbian porn, a nice sight/
For straight people like me/
But not for you cos you’re a gay guy G/
O.D.W.I.N, that’s how you should spell retard/
Cos you get an erection over a pack of playing cards/
When you saw the jack, you started to jack off/
Cos you’re a jackass and jacking off is the only way you’re coming/
Because a guy, I mean gay like you would never get a real man or woman/

Fucked Up Faggots/

Yeah and this is my mother fucking story/
I’m facing all these charges and you’re on the jury/
Ready to send my ass from the courtrooms/
To the fucking prison for crawling out of my mommas womb/
You were my best friend dawg what happened/
I’ve been real tense but my rope has slackened/
And I stopped giving a fuck about crap/
I went through a lot of shit, so I turned to rap/
And since then all we’ve been doing/
Is talking shit, fighting, hating and arguing/
And you think I’m just messing, I’m not I am going through shit/
As much shit as gets on your dick, and on Farmer’s grits/
You said it yourself that I don’t give a fuck/
Well that was bullshit; I dismissed it and now look/
I never gave a fuck, and now I give a fuck less/
Cos these mother fucking critics putting me under too much stress/
Well I can explain to you why I don’t like you/
It’s cos you’re retarded, gay, weird and you hate Jews/
I’m not religious but I hated chauvinists/
Cos you all think it’s cool, but then again y’all get pissed/
Off water, black currant, and occasionally cum/
Don’t fucking annoy me, I can’t harm you, I’ve got a bum/
Knee, so I can’t run, I can’t chase/
Even if you take the piss out of my race,/
On the pitch you think you’re Jens Lehman/
You wondering who you are, it’s you Damon/

Fucked Up Faggots/

sorry its a bit long, but it was 3 freestyles put together

this open mic was kinda boring because it was tooo long it had no type of ryhme scheme the flow wasnt there it gave you no type of visual feeling and i wasnt feeling this you need to reallly elevate

ive took out one of the verses now, cos it was definitely too long

i cant lie that shit was wack...ya rhyme scheme wasnt work plus ya flow was losin me cause it was long and outta sync

this open mic was kinda boring because the topic was wack it was tooo long it had a sucky ryhme scheme the flow wasnt there it gave you no type of visual feeling and i wasnt feeling this you need to reallly elevate alot...peace

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