War

~ War ~

Bush sends us to war and suddenly hes so bad,
But if he didnt retaliate then the US would of been had.
Regaurdless What happens wars going on now in our lifes,
And soliders out there fightin for our god givin rights.
UnUnderstood hate is what makes us debate our thought,
For life within the USA and the connection that has us caught..
When were over there we sittin helpin da Irac army,
we're stand round shout how anyone cant "harm me".
People diein in a war to keep the united people together,
screamin how we step to a sound of a dropping feather.
people obsessing over the marines being the first in and out,
But no one seems to keep on top of our otha men still walkin about..
united we stand together we fall and seperated never at heart,
In the war struggle it only bout the guns and not the smarts.
cause no matter the diff from us to them,
it ends up coming down to the weapon..
We sit around bitchin bout bush's awfull decsion,
But its up to the military to complete the mission...
And i'm getting tired of peps makin fool on bush,
But he aint makin the army.. Not givin them a push..
Its thier choice to join the number 1 military..
and if not they are defeted to become killer ladies..
George aint the type of mayne to be irrational,
Hes makin the right dession to make the fear national,
Cause everyone needs to know its the time..
Cause we live in a world with to much crime..
And To think for 1 sec that this is a peacful song,
Your not only a moron but ur completly wrong,
Even though you aint out there fightin for ur country,
Doesnt mean this whole war wont be harming,
And in the militarys hands we give our fate,
Without the right outcome, earths ruled by hate....

~ War ~

that was crazy dog. Really made me think on how every body hatin on bush but wat he did was eventually gonna happen. ur structure was great. ur flow was great couldve use some bigger words. I could literally feel ur heart lots of deep shit in there
that closin was crazy nice. Man that was an over all greatly put together peice.

9/10

thanks mayne...

very patriotic it has a good meaning behind it
back to the basics huh
but i liked it

Yes i felt that it was patriotic. It felt a bit siumple in terms of rhyme bvut it was okay. Flow was on point throughout the piece. Struxture could be up[ped a bit but overall an okay piece.

2 links or this gets closed, Thanks.

2 links?