Seck(1-0) vs Andres (1-0)

LLL Jr. Week 2

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first week went kinda well no shows are gone and cats who showed and who signed up are now in...

same as last week check by wednesday drop by friday come good....if your opponent fails to check but shows then that will be allowed but they will be deducted 2 votes for failure to check.....
so all in all you MUST drop a verse this week.....

last of all voting.....im scrapping the 4 links this week, unless voting activity goes then this is how it will stay and if i catch anyone feeding off the first vote you will have votes deducted...constant offence then i'll boot your ass from the league.....


good luck all

:2thumb:

check..... 4.J.C.G.... how bout 10 bars seck?.....

checkin in. 10 bars.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...7&page=1&pp=15
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...04#post3547804
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...05#post3547805

For the second round, i'm facing this spic, this latin rapper
He ain't brown because of his skin, it's shit, he should be packin pampers
He doesn't make sense, is he speaking spanish? 'cause when he spit it sounds like he's rappin backwards
you think speaking spanish is an advantage you have?
I can speak the language too and I ain't afraid to call you a fag
hey maricone, i'm not actually mad at ya
I just know that if rap was a store, i'd be the boss and you'd be the janitor
and just like all latino kids, your parents didn't plan on havin ya
what kind of mom names their bastard child Andres?
probably one that knew he'd want to make faggots undress

How you expecting to beat me scrub, when your crew dont even reckon*
You just like 'Nicholas Cage', after reading this you'll be 'Gone in 60 'Seck'onds'

You cant handle me..., rappin in another language I'd still say an ill line
'Tu pene es más pequeño que mío', means your dick is smaller than mine

Look at this queer rapper everyone, lets see what gay lines await
Just like your golf game homo, your shots never seem to hit straight

Give me your best heat Seck, I blow you out like you was a birthday cake
You wit a heart monitor, wit no pulse, is the only line you could ever make**

Yea you got yourself a win, it's probably cause Aines made a blunder***
Just like your 'age' dawg, your last win, was your only 'one' hit wonder


*-Reckon means to believe... which means in this case your crew dont even believe

**-When someone is dead and connected to a heart monitor it shows a straight line cause their heart isnt working because their dead

***-Blunder means mistake

lmao at you explaining your rhymes

wtf @ this battle, i will not break it down,............both verses were all over the place

and never explaine ya verse, were not dumb u kno........*speaks for self*

V/seck 4 better concepts and his opener

thanks for voting philly... and for the great explanation...

uppin for the night.... 0-1 seck i guess.....

Dont really got to break this down...

structure-seck
flow-seck
punches-andreas
vocab-andreas
multies-tie

V/andreas(barley both need to come harder) No Hate

Surprised at phillys vote...
Was a weak battle but was clearly obvious Andreas got it to me...

Sek- No quotables really, ur opener was the best line but i still didnt like it ive heard too much shit along the same lines and i wasnt feeling it. All in all u need to make ur punches hit hit harder, and make ur verse seem less basic, it was boring 2 me to be honest. Elevate.

Andreas - Ur verse wasnt decent either, but still enough for the win. 1 or 2 barz that i thought was ok though, which was more than your opponents. I agree with philly though when he said dont explain ur lines, that shit is gay, if we wont understand them straight away, then dont use them, simple. But you got this win with better punches, and wittier and funnier lines.

V/ andreas for harder punches, and wittier / funnier lines. Also 2 barz worth quoting as ok.

You cant handle me..., rappin in another language I'd still say an ill line
'Tu pene es más pequeño que mío', means your dick is smaller than mine
ur best line imo
How you expecting to beat me scrub, when your crew dont even reckon*
You just like 'Nicholas Cage', after reading this you'll be 'Gone in 60 'Seck'onds'
If u wouldve out somethin about lockin him up = nicholas cage or somethin, wouldve been good.
But still enough to win a weak battle.

2-1 Andres.... uppin before i go...

its 1-1 as game ovas vote didnt count

but my vote goes 2 andres i aint breakin no shit down

horrible battle lol

Seck (1-1)
Andres (2-0)