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Endless Possibilities
EndLess Possiblities
Spaced out, staring...your imagination kicks in
you let those endless possiblities begin.........
fantaies are in your eyes and you have a visual
without this happenin.. ya life is totally miserable...
Flying into the sky or a sweet chocolate city
Day dream in school, teachers interupt, such a pity
that should be breakin a rule from the committee
endless possiblities are all in the game,its real nice
fuck up my endless possibilities it wont be pretty
i'll make ya life end or make the rest of it shitty
Stepping into the arena, crowd going wild as fuck
in a boxing match gloves on fists pumped ready to fight
He hiot me in the face, my temper was ready to destruct
after that match was over he would neva see the day's light
killed a nigga and thats my endless possibility numba one
violence and killing in my dreams were just about done..
Walking in a maze, confusion, short circuiting my mind
me eye sight was going blind and i coudlnt rewind..
i collapsed to the ground and woke up in a hospital
and trust me this shit right here is really possible...
and me dreamin of endless possibilities is unstoppable
so fuck who eva wanna block them from my my brain
prepare to face there life's grand fanale of total pain
and you will neva be the same and that wont change
endless possibibilites means anything is truely possible
that's what i believe and its the way it will be.........
and i hope all you otha niggaz will agree wit me....
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pretty tight peice...topic was interesting and the flow was smooth
vocab was good and rhymes were good too.......
strucute was perfect..lay out was tight..overall tis was good
keep it up,,,peace
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yo if i say i was feelin it i'd be lyin...this shit was borin
tha flow was straight but it wasnt interestin, plus it seemed like some shit rhymed and some shit didnt, and half tha time it was elementary,not ta mention u lost me. honestly just keep ya shit on point cuz this got potential but it aint great
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yeh, not bad homie.. i've seen better from you honestly tho.. the 1st 2 parts was what caught me, and i guess thats where all the ideas came to you...at the start.... it left a lil dragged on.. but was still a good topic, the imagery was there and the rhymes were pretty tight, the flow was okay... but got a lil inconsistent, still a good read man, i didnt get bored coz i luv readin ya shit :D.. keep elevatin man, could you also go n check out my piece " My Authority "... that would be appreciated man
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yea fa sho..i'll check it out..and thanks for the feed..uppin
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I liked the flow, kept constant. Can't say the topic necessarily intrested me, but it was your rap. Besides that, I'd say it was really good.
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that was nice man/ nice wordplay i was feelin dat spit man
structure was tight
flow was pretty good
1st and 2nd piece was wow!
nice job dogg
vocab nice
over rall this was pretty iLL
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thanks for the feed guys i appreciate it..uppin
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tight yo...nice imagry dope perspective at the yopic..
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thanks yo...i'll get to ya OM
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fantaies are in your eyes and you have a visual
without this happenin.. ya life is totally miserable...
I liked the concept for that. The first stanza was my favorite. I didn't care for the the last, 3 line, stanza. You might want to consider ending at the stanza before it. Thanks for checking out my piece.
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It was a decent concept, in my oppinion you jumped around to much, changing your topic. I would have liked it better if you concentrated on one thing and just made it dope as possible.
Nice drop though. Keep Elevating and dropping.
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thanks both of you..i appreciate it..uppin
