R.i.p Mac Dre

MAC DRIZZLE DID THE THIZZLE AND HE WIGGLED TO DA BEAT
THE BAY SIZZLED, WHEN HE BROUGHT THE THIZZLE TO DA STREET
THIZZELE WASHINGTON AND RONALD DREGAN ON THE TRACK
HIM AND HIS CREW ON ATTACK
NUMBER BAY BOY, REPPIN AND GIVIN IT BACK
HE STAYED WIT A TOY, HEAVY AND BLACK,EVERYBODY KNOW ABOUT DA MAC
ROLLIN IN A SCRAPER, DANCIN ON DA HOOD
GHOST RIDE THE WHIP AND DIP, AND SHOW 'EM WHAT'S GOOD
18 CDs DROPPED, 10 POUNDS COPPED
ALWAYS RUNNIN THE MEAN STREETZ BUT HE NEVA GOT POPPED
HE WAS RESPECTED AND WEALTHY
DIPPED IN BUTTER AND HEALTHY
HE WAS A CREST SIDE RIDER DOPE DEALER AND INSIDER
BUT ONE DAY HE GOT SHOT IN KANSAS, KILLED HIM AND THE DRIVER
BUT HIS MUSIC LIVES ON, R.I.P. THE THIZZ-MC-GUYVER

lol alrite piece
flow - 6/10
structure - 6/10
rhyming - 6/10
like it? - 8/10
overall - 6.5/10
elevate

If this was a freestyle you just did in the street, then its cool. But as text, its poor. The -Izzle bits just looked silly to me, I hope you do audio, because this was useless as a Open Mic.

thnx.............................................. ......gimme more

to be honest man, i didnt really like this piece, like....it may sound better in audio...you had a topic and everything, but im sure you coulda made this better, more creative....and the rhyming of "izzles" didnt catch my eye at all, try n get away from that, unless you can make it dope like snoop..haha...anyway stay up man....keep elevatin

flow - 5/10
structure - 7/10
rhyming - 5/10
like it - 3/10
o/a - 6.3/10
ElEvAtE