Love Runs Deeper

You and me me and you love so unique nobody got a clue/You're my heart you're my soul since four years ago gurl I've always stayed true/I see it in your eyes I hear it in voice/I feel it when you cry we've made a bad choice/I know that the hurt I have now can't compare to the hurt I put you through in the past/But with everthing that we've been through I can't see it ending here and we gotta last or I'm gonna crash/I know it makes you laugh cuz I've been a jackass/You've been hurt 10 times worse than I have/It's my fault now I want you to forgive forget again/One more chance thats twenty plus ten/ Now i know without a doubt I need you in my life I want you as my wife/And I wanna treat you right you're my angel in the night/And the light that shines through your eyes all I need to survive/Let you go for the last time tryna fall asleep askin myself why why//

Through and through gurl I'll always love you no matter what we do gurl you're always my boo/No matter the problem I'm there for you you ever need some lovin gurl I got you too/Cuz my love runs deeper than the ocean blue gurl you're always my boo gurl you're always my boo/My love runs deeper than the ocean blue gurl you're always my boo gurl you're always my boo//

Now we don't know whats in the future sky/Don't wanna look back knowin that I shoulda tried/I'm tryna express how I feel inside/When I lost you felt I coulda died/Surrounded by thoughts of the tears we've cried/But everytime I pulled through cuz you're by my side/I love you gummy bear now that's no lie/Even though I fucked up about a million times/I confess my crimes I express my mind/Through expressive rhymes to make you mine/I'm the only one for you and you know it's true/Those other guys never had a clue/That the love between us was so pure and the deepest/I have no secrets you're my weakness gurl I wanna keep this/Wanna taste your sweet kiss I know that between us there's too much shit/I'm an asshole admit you're a bitch just forgive and forget/Lets get married start a life have kids/Me without you you without me/Equals fuck the world R.I.P. Shanksta T T//

Through and through gurl I'll always love you no matter what we do gurl you're always my boo/No matter the problem I'm there for you you ever need some lovin gurl I got you too/Cuz my love runs deeper than the ocean blue gurl you're always my boo gurl you're always my boo/My love runs deeper than the ocean blue gurl you're always my boo gurl you're always my boo//(X2)

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yo ST u gotta leave 2 links that u left feedback on or the mods are gonna close this and yea that was alrite work on the vocab a lil

I liked it. It needs to be structured to read better, but good noonetheless, nice job...