Back Then

(It aint my best work but when it comes it comes)

The hurt~the pain inside is enough to be convicted
Will the consequence be exactly what you predicted
Why does life enjoy~peoples natural shock
Young teen, 7 times been in~a~cell block
Put my bracelets on, so I cant move my hands
Have you eva been trapped in dem handcuffs man
When it's time to go court before you even step in
The judge made his decision you stuck 7-10
Now you gotta live wit these pussy lovin tricks
Niggas gettin turned out only likin dicks
Damn the same sentence just like last time
Felonous Assault its the same crime
Promised mom's~I wasnt comin back to dis place
Second court date damn look at my face
Now I'm out of here think I'm free
Naw it jus got started off to YDC...

(This was wrote cause of my troubled past when I stayed posted up, But times change)
**FOR YALL SLOW FOLKS YDC AINT JUVI IT'S LIKE JUVI JUST STR8 LOCK DOWN ALL DA TIME. AND THE GAURDS DO WHAT EVA THEY WANT TO**

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261313

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=261346

umm ok well what did you do to go to jail. Decent flow I guess. It skips around no real great scheme but still average..

I got 2 counts of felonous assault, assault on a juvenile staff, attempted escape, and felony wit weapon... And thanx 4 da feed.. constructive criticism is good..

I was really feeling this in the begining... but right at the middle almost literally you lost me.. But the begining... now I liked that, it had a good vision to it... nice beat.. ( For people who dont know.. I can hear beats in my head lol) It's like you started off telling a good story and it got ghetto...

dis waz coo i liked it........ multiz need a little bit of work but a good story dat grabbed attention keep it up........


Put my bracelets on, so I cant move my hands
Have you eva been trapped in dem handcuffs man
When it's time to go court before you even step in
The judge made his decision you stuck 7-10

I didnt really think this was that bad, i kinda liked itm just need to get a little more creative and complex with the actual rhyming itself but other then that it wasnt bad

hit up "just like he said" in my sig, thnx