-
So Many....
-INTRO-
yeah....let me tell you a few things about me...my feelings...
...some of my life....my story.....my testemony
-HOOK-
so many obsticales, so many things is possable
his love for us truly unstoppable
so many people are touched every single day
i've been blessed in so many ways
-VERSE 1-
12 years old...feelin so bold, nothin to charish or hold
thinkin god & the bible was anouther story everyone knows
stayin on the streets by myself all alone at night
didn't belive in miricals and didnt wanna see the light
got put in a group home..........in a small town
went to they church never smiled there was always a frown
3 months later...........i was back on the streets
seen my best friend die...said lord why me...i'ma "g"
13 years old now in buckhorn wilderness program
didnt have church so nobody tryed to take the spiritual stand
some things happened while i was there...it's too personal
the staff didnt belive the thought what i said was questional
hiked from tennessee all the way back to kentucky
got to go home, but i refused, really i was lucky
i had never gotten through anything that took will-power
....and i was known to be be a religious coward
-HOOK-
so many obsticales, so many things is possable
his love for us truly unstoppable
so many people are touched every single day
i've been blessed in so many ways
-VERSE 2-
look into my eyes.....you'll see much pain
turn to him you got nothin to lose but so much to gain
you hear all these words thats comin through ya speakaz
they aint mine they comin from our lord, the father of jesus
before i lay my head down to get some rest
i thank god for him leavin me so...................blessed
i have the talent to write these raps
i only have him to thank for that
listen closely...before you approach me
dont come at me with that shit cause i'm not foney
if you would have come at me with that about 7 months ago
i most likely wouldnt have said no
listen to everyone of the 42 bars that i done spit
theres so many teens blessed with kids
so many people have undesired weddeins
turn to him.....just ask......and you'll recive a blessin'
-HOOK-
so many obsticales, so many things is possable
his love for us truly unstoppable
so many people are touched every single day
i've been blessed in so many ways
its on some spiritual shit so what i thought it was a good idea, yeah i'm goin a lil spiritual in my raps gotta problem with it? If so, get over it
-=MY LINKS=-
Bitch Niggaz Meet Your Match(Not Me)
...Confuzed & Complicated...
-
this shit is hot im'a give you 2 thumbs up nigga
yo you whent hard on this one
i like your songs then your battles
-
yeah well i battled your alias and won plus you shouldnt vote for yourself
-
-
12 years old...feelin so bold, nothin to charish or hold
If you reworded this to "12 years old...feeling so bold, nothing to charish, nothing to hold.
That flows a little better. You showed alot of emotion, i liked this one better than your other one.
-
i thought it was good, it had a personal meaningful message i just thought the rhymes were a little basic in the first verse, the 2nd one def more complex. the intro and the hook is straight too.
keep up the good work tho
-
thanx for all the feed but im uppin this for more feed
-
niceish drop
sum gd emotion
flow ws gd
structure ws gd
rhymin ws gd
keep at it, this ws a gd piece
-
-
this was nice here. i like the message dat was being givin out. very nice lyrical. keep doin u
-
thanx and i will dont worry
-
this was a good drop, i liked the fact that you'd let your life leak into your rhymes and not have any regrets. i do think the chorus or hook was kinda corney, but mabye its because the way you flow it isnt the way that i flow it, overall really good, 1st verse was good, second verse was a lil shakey but i still liked it...
keep doin ya thing homie...
-
-
Good drop, decent topic, good use of vocabs really aint feel your flow, but you still did good. Keep it up
-
