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in the air
hook (girl voice)
i can feel it comin in the air tonight..............oh lord
i been waitin for this moment for all my life....oh lord
can you feel it comin in the air tonight
i been waitin for this moment for all my life....oh lord
verse 1
i keep thinkin in my mind
that i'm bout to get signed
i put blood, sweat, an tears
an i conqured all my fears
to try to make it big
better the way i live
cause i'm tired of bein broke
i'm tired of bein a joke
it's the same shit different day
an tomorrows gonna be the same way
i think about my life
will i ever find a wife
or will i just be lonley
hangin wit my homey
it feels like i'm stuck in the mud
an nobody shows me love
i feel self consious like no one likes me
but when i get the deal every one a like me
i feel like givin up
befo i live it up
i feel like callin it quits
but somethin won't let me quit
i gotta keep spittin
even though i feel like quitin
somethin tells me to keep at my dream
one day reconnition will be redeemed
now life ain't fair
but i can feel it in the air
i'm gonna get signed
when the time is right
i feel it's my time
big-j bout to shine
hook
verse 2
a sparks lit at my ass it's about to ignite
i'm bout to get signed it's in the air tonight
i bennefit from the strife
writin bout my life
if you don't like it then too damn bad
bein a country boy well thats the new fab
i refuse to change
country i'm a remaine
i rap about real shit
so you can feel the shit
if you don't like it i don't give a damn
cause what you see an hear thats what i am
shit keeps gettin worse
it's like i been cursed
i got a girl now
but how long will she stick around
i don't really know
cause god's the only one that knows
lifes one big gamble
it's like a big shamble
it gets worse by the day
or at least it feels that way
but i can feel it in the air tonight
tomorrows when i'm gone get signed
an then comes the tours
along wit the whores
then comes the fans
but i done gotta plan
hook
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yo this is hot. i like the hook.
and tha 1st verse tell's it all
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thanx dawg but the hook is an old genisis song so i just used it an htanx for the feed. uppin
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uppin ya'll i need feed what the fuck ya'll sleepin on this for
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man this wasnt really good, the flow was Fucked up, the ryhmes were not coming 2gether it sounded like a too short song, mayne u got alot of Working to do
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thanks for the feed man. but the song is fast paced rymin if that helps ya any. thats the way i recorded it. an it sounds pretty good
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uhm not bad still as a song.. u put some emotion in between da lines but diddnt put much intention in the rhymes
so the flow kind of lost impact in my opinion.. needed a bit mo rawness to it
and a bit mo complexity to the flo would of been good.. keep practicing still..
pz1
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hey u in the crew or wot? ent heard from ya for time b... holla
