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Exposure ( honest feed)
No other has done what i've done in my years of droppin' this
But my main frame was to remain sane, dont fear apocaylpse
Can't see clear, the dominance in the people have passed on
Man's now penetrated with vile shit like its Evil with strap-ons
While praying on myself, to make it thru fakeness and all that
There's some points where humanity'll be safe if we fall back
But every race i've known is 2 proud to let their guards down
But even Pride's a sin, so we could all just forget its hard, now
Theres not a doubt, that theres hypocrisy within a mindstate
But contradictions are only based if it'll cringe the crime rates
No other person really lives it, cus it all depends on wise takes
On how the human race is movin' inside percents of fine space
Could there be a reason to why establishment is lost in debt
When all the land you've owned is adequate to start respect
Seems as if money makes us all revolt in every constant step
When everything we say is charged back as a cost of death
Exposure, and pain, its the same example
Of explainin' babble, that'll change a battle
No one - Really cares on the messes God has left
But now - Even our own soul's at loss of breath
Stop this mess, no one will ever Pay-Mind to Listen
THe Same Kind of bitches that Hate Eyes with vision
Its Plain, I'm a glitch, With the mind of a saint
And Life Lived can't be spelled without DIE in its name
They tell us to pay forward, ignore pain to the upmost
Insane torture, Gamblin' life is now made to be up close
Extinction is long over due, but no one's waitin' demise
Even some elders are tired, and too damn lazy to die
Its crazy, but life has no limits, and some surpasses all
When caskets fall, it opens, all you see is cash from ya'll
Some acid vaults, and capsules to deteriorate migraines
Hidden cameras in pills prescripted to investigate my pains
It's been told, that the world will soon lose its Last Esteem
When a man was killed in corruption just for Having Dreams
Fast, it seems, but even some others try to go in a rush
A man shot in public, and still no one knows who it was
Crazy ain't it? How it all gathers up in the tapes, to view it
when the nation gets hit, it never reveals scrapes n bruises
My aim is useless, cause no one will ever notice a teenage
Thinkin' I'm just a cliche' of a person, "this is only a replay"
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yo people are going to shit if u dont put a couple links in here....lol. I'm from BOSTON too bro...and I got a boy named Ghost who is from here as well lol....but I must say this shit was tight. Nice multis...inners...and sound manipulation that only a real rapper could understand. The flow was flawless. This is the second good piece i have read today on this site..maybe its making a turn around lol. If you could go read my shit I think you'd like it. drop some feed too if ya would. stay up and keep writing dog...this shit is hot.
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Could there be a reason to why establishment is lost in debt
When all the land you've owned is adequate to start respect
Seems as if money makes us all revolt in every constant step
When everything we say is charged back as a cost of death
nice...deep as well
overall flow was tite.. i think its the 1st time i seen u writing in a format like this....
n u did it very well.. wording was on point.. rhymes was mostly nicee
lots of flow variations as well as the song goes on .. giving it true musical qualities
nice ending
dope
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ight so this was okay.
first verse- not best but enjoyable,noce flow and i just liked it
second verse- nice,got better i liked it,good vocab and finish was tight.
overall i would give ya 8/10
keep up check my om thnx
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dawg the joint was hot you on some ill deep shit i feelin you plus you reppin mass you in tha bean im from the city of springfield im field rep all day yahmean but bump that all in all that was an ill drop keep that shit pumpin ~1~
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MOre feeds...........thanx for the feeds
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UPPin.............leave linxs ... i'll chekc 'em
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hot shit b i like this thats nice good multis and inners in that shit u dope boi ill give that to ya
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aight this peice was good, it had flow to it and some nice vocab to go along wit dat
nice drop 7.5/10
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its was a good piece man and i think u can write betta then diz...and i give that shit 8/10 man and i wish to c ya in my posting
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real good drop by you ghost nice rhyme scheme and creativity you need to work on more metas though it would have made the piece stand out a little more in my opinion but you were to a point were you have gotten better during the last verse but it was an okay drop keep it up
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Word^..........good looks
UPPin......drop links
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