just a writting drill battling

Picture me getting served. Nah
rip that image out the frame
Fuck a scrimmage I Battle infinite,
beating lames, without commercial gimmicks.
The rhyme cynic…
freestyle going the extra mile like Honda civics
at the top of my game, like I took gold in the Olympics.
Blazing the crowd and changing skin pigments
I aint saying you pussy but I recognize the aroma.
Well versed in schooling, word to my high school diploma
Dick riders treat me like an organ donor…
So If I’m slept on its cause I left fans in comas.
Noncentz the obnoxious leave you nautius
Raps colossus, aint no sonning me ….
Im about to show the game what menopause is.
You don’t want it when I’m this hype on the mic
My spit tight while you wouldn’t drop a hit in a fist fight.
When i drop the bomb Im murdering every nemisis on premises
Stay in the mix like chemisists , battling since genisis Im the man
these rap Bitch’s I served deliver more hate~mail (male) then feminists.
Staying stoned like amaphis rhyme cancerous
The answer is…. Noncentz
the question is…. who you aint got the balls to diss.
Of coarse im on some battle ish I don’t care who’s apauled
Since I was six my moms said fight for a cause.
Deliver with simplicity Spit with the force of a rhino admissibly,
I’ll ruin your authenticity seeing me visibly?
you must be more confused than an albinos ethnicity .
forbidden from riddling hype and dosed off ridlen
im that nice I give suicide a reason for living.
Keep the dank in my think tank
breaking davinnci codes like tom hanks
So many want to be like me, they got accounts for sperm bank
Hate to pull rank but the flow general your flows in general
Are minimal not even a fraction of my skills im none divisible.
An aninal …I stay hungry
Resting this is dumber than Mace bitting lyrics from Puffy.

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tight tight shit, that was some dope vocab it fit in perfectly wit the flow
resembling that spm style that i like, the flow of the whole piece was tight and on tact throughout ur entire verse--imagery wasnt too good but thatz koo since u used a lot of metaphors, only thing u should improve is the structure good job though~l8er

uppin

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Originally Posted by noncentz

uppin

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damn i guess i picked a bad time to return

uppin

I think you show a rare talent on this board to actually rap, as versus just spitting out the same shit we've heard on the radio from the same idiots for fifteen years. I don't see anything about you in any of your raps, though, aside from your apparent need to establish yourself as a badass... but what's new with rappers. They all think they can win any fight, and most of them fail for that very reason... Its that mentality that holds back true talent, because it transforms good lyrics into less meaningful, monotonous information that's better left to fifty cent and ja rule.

no never a bad ass but i love to showcase how i rape eddicate i thank you for you words and would love to see your work

just look around, you can find some of my pieces on the board, I posted a new one a few hours ago. I always appreciate feedback.

aight i'll do that

this is alright but the flow coudlve been way better
and the vocab wanst too bad you did alright but i felt that maybe if you wouldve chose a specific topic to rap to maybe you wouldve dropped something more interesting you still need 2 eleate though strutcure can be improved as well