10 Lines....asap Check,....verse Due 30 Min's After Check
Meh
Good Luck Bruv,
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10 Lines....asap Check,....verse Due 30 Min's After Check
Meh
Good Luck Bruv,
Check.
HeHe, Check...
9 mins All It TooK....
My First To Lines I'll Use Em By Plain Jus Being Lame
I Cant Get Personal, They All Been Used On That Whack Name.....
Ya shit wouldnt be Felt or Seen better if u slice a Slit In Ya Vision::
Determaning Your sex was still left up to a Doctors Split Decision::
Bribe went Fishing and this Kid got Hooked cause of his Mouth::
Asked How u accomplished those Wins and all hands point south::
I Can name those in your win list and it still be considered a filler::
My Overpowering novel suspensefully ,succesfully belittled that thriller::
Punches of yours are old and get grilled similar to a foreman comeback::
Youll have headz bangin if u take This verse ^^to foreheads witt thumbtacks::
..................Meh,
Man you're stupid, I got no choice but to enforce violence and slaughter
I'd tell ya you're rhymes needed depth, but then you'de just spit under water
Get some intellegence before stepping to me faggot, no way you can compete
Just like at the title of this thread, he already admitted he was gonna get beat
You're rhymes are incomplete, you're flows off and you're conepts are over used
You got the boot from this camp; I must be a drill sgt. the way ya gettin abused
That type of wordplay leaves dumb fucks like you confused, I feel ya frustration
Only writer's get wirters block, so when you can't write we call it constipation
I know you're starting to feel trepidation, but don't worry soon it will be over
Damn man you're minutes up, so now like you were dead just rollover
Keyed, Don't get it don't vote
Good battle.... i liked both sides... battle coulda had more meta.... but it's gud my vote is for
v/Dusk
this is me....///Quote:
Originally Posted by .i.
lmao... hot battle
Signed- Good battle nig especially goin up against someone like Dusk... you came hard was feelin the punchez and flow liked ya structure too ... BUT
Dusk- Mah nig ... good battle was feelin all the punchez wordplay and multies were crazy(lmao) was diggin the structure and the flow personals too very on point which is why you win this battle
v- Dusk
v/ dusk ... better wordplay & punches ... Signed .. u need to up ya punches a bit ... they wernt hittin hard enough .. no hate!!
Thanks my niggas. Uppin 1
Man you're stupid, I got no choice but to enforce violence and slaughter
I'd tell ya you're rhymes needed depth, but then you'de just spit under water
Get some intellegence before stepping to me faggot, no way you can compete
Just like at the title of this thread, he already admitted he was gonna get beat
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nothin
1 more vote.
plz hit my sig wit an honest vote on each thanx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...2&page=1&pp=15
hit in return wit a vote
dusk first 3 barz took this battle for me he had better punches and some nice mettahs that took my vote
Vote Dusk