Me Against The World (freeverse) - DROP LINKS I WILL RETURN IT!!!

Song Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/util/getpl...d=3907656&q=hi

S'c Link:
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page...?bandID=525342

alright....leave good feedback and I'll return it if you drop links.

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good quality......beats perfect for the topic....flow is decent but needs a lil work.....lyrics are pretty good....feelin the topic.....use some mroe emotion 2 bro....pertty nice verse dawg, shood def make thsi a trakk

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=291713

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Man da flow got kinda repeative to me but I like little interlude that waz dope u got a good voice.. U just need to polish ya shits up a lil don't flow da same way all da time I like da beat. Kinda sounds like u waz reading sth u got some potential it wasn't bad.. keep it up homie
RAWW

thanks, uppin

Ok this is pretty good.Delivery is quite good too.Smooth rhymes,really feeling them.Liked the beat a lot real nice.As RAW said Interlude was dope.Show a bit more emotion in your voice caus eyou got mad potential and I can really see you becoming pure dope.Keep this shit up bro and no doubt i'll be looking out

thanks, uppin