keystyle - no backspace or delete or things and just... i dunno, just vibe with it

its all towards what budget affords, cutting the chords
like honda accord sports and swamari swords
pause. swinging in the sky on a screen,
violent-teen supplying green with an eye on the dream
livings a scream- driven by a voice in the walls
poison the calls to where padded floors cushion the falls
pushing the rules. think because the clues in the title
moving towards a soothing survival. suicidal.
a rival turning into a threat, things to protect
and furthermore cling to the bet, instant respect
an industry thats built on a cheque and still young
and a metaphor thats stuck to the tongue
bordom to stunned- im hoping for a piece of the grain
easing the pain, provoking small parts of my brain
my smokings insane. open on a quote from my books
focus on looks, and notice when the buyers are crooks
Boris
wanna get a fix from the rhyme, restrictions on time
tryna pen a verse that sticks in your mind
predictions are fine. the kitchen is a...

meh

i dont know how to do links but i reply to people sometimes, and i read every1s and think and shit so dont be anal

gay ass shit.......I wish u would kill yourself...........-20 out of 10........good luck at sucking the rest of ya life

sucking is a state of illusion, constant confusion
i'm running on an empty solution. no conclusion
theres a lack of news with regards to the style
auto re-dial, i'm convinced my name appears in a file
been watched for a while. boris minus 20 and counting
started doubting - eyes down, screaming, desprately shouting
next outing. plus insults are real bad for karma. ask mama
and they'll wink at it when you come across trauma.
no harm, standing on the shoulders of courts
crushed from the force, but breathing through a series of straws
serious thoughts, but still nearly on the brink of a peace
but still restless because my ego drew up lines on the sheets
divided our seats. Also read this in a london drawl
its how i say it, plus degreed in a redudant school
its how i played it....

mehhh

This is good clean fun right here, taking lyrics an running anywhere an everywhere with it...which is what its all about...sometimes your just got to let your inner lyricism take over an mind fuck words ya feel me? Yea good job man, good decent keystyle...keep at it...

Yo if you get the chance hit me back up on my latest piece....thanks yo peace...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...74#post4454374

not bad for keys at all

your thoughts were a little all over and shit. but hey its ramblings in rhyme form. nothing wrong with that.

keep dropping.

werd^ this wasn't bad for a keystyle....alright flow...nice rhymes....

and ya this was overall a pretty nice freestyle...

but maybe next time write a peice..but still prett good

keep at it man...peace~

i guess so, but its par for the course-
stopping to pause, shaking hands with dark sides of the force
eyes on the porsche whilst clinging onto shreds of respect
and my battery is dying - put down to cause-and-effect
laws in a state of confusion, the great illusion
says the answer is a stone institution. a poor conclusion
filling-in now Boris is growing, a mind of his own
and the thoughts are sporadic but its part of the poem
the heart of a lone gunman that sweats
growing obsessed with the code of respect, appealing direct
and if Boris wasn't hung up on self, or fucked up his health
He'd be dead and i'd be free to excel- freedom is hell
tryna convince you that i'm sane to your face
but the screaming kinda weakens my case, jesus is ace
lol, but jesus wasn't the son of the sun, its all a chain
and he fits into a fictional frame, the bibles insane!
the rivals inane, excuse my rant on religion
but i recently won a fight with the system, the targets are shifting
the market is lifting up borders until the goals change
gold chains, old sayings, leader until the polls change
gun ranges stretch from here to Belgrade...
on my knees crying because the photos a fade
justifies his subject matter with fodder
and tell eleete that the left pictures hotter
just so she knows lol

i have to keep writing its like... therapy