Hit Em Hard

We know New York can’t leave the game too long, you just get faulty copies
I cant stop with my game, I’m too strong to let these sukkas stop me.
Let me repeat myself, retarded rappers need to lay low.
Y’all don’t deserve to get an official K.Gee K.O.
Y’all know me, the remedy with the crazy spit
When you come up short like a baby’s…ok, moving on
You think you’s a champ just cause ur internet crew be on?
I’ll just click my nike’s three times, and fo sho you’ll be gone.
I can’t go mainstream. I’ll just be around some fake’s and clowns
My victory is a metaphor for violence? Other way around
I’ll just buy up someone’s house worth about 10 million
I’d rather live in a average house with a 10 foot ceiling.
I’m sick of posers who think that they’re like Eminem
They glorify themselves and soon as they get a sniff of the heaven scent
I am the complete opposite. On the real, I am humble
And so lyrical, I confuse peoples just like Bryant Gumbal
I’ll rock them fools and force them to serve me
Then shine with my team just like James Worthy.
Look on the back of the New York Jersey, I’m numero uno
Come to me with a wack rap and I’ll hit you with the judo.
I’m bright as Einstein, or rather a luminous spirit
So when I speak, make sure that all your crew and them hear it.
I reminisce last year, when I had the dope rhyme scheme
With hopes that one day I’d be on top and everyone would compare me
To the legendary one and only Microphone Fiend
Stupid rappers leave the mic alone, please!
I mean we all heard Game’s diss with the 300 bars
This don’t rhyme but 50, as to ya skills, you ain’t got none.
He got the ignorance to start beef but not mature enough to stop one
I ain’t mature though, ill kill an MC as long as I got one
I Hit ‘em Hard

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wow..i got to admiitt this had some sick rhymes and multies
flow was nice and structure was nice
the only thing im not feeling is the topic
too simple and too plain..but anyways this was really good
i liked it...keep it up man..you got potential for real

thanks man, uppin

aight dis was pretty good had a couple good metas pretty nice flow throughout but like ..... said tha topic wasnt really good u need sum betta imagery but yo topic aint really give yoself a chance 2 paint a picture but overall it was nice

ok ill think about it. one more comment plz. bump

bump

aight then as im only the exprinced one that is about to comment about ur shit
heres the verdict


firstly use higher vocab wat i mean is use more intelutucal words..fix up ur structre
u got some decent multis but it could elevate

so far homie ya alright but u can elevate

take my advice and u be one dope head...

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yeah your structure could use some work
but overall this was a nice piece nice multi's
decent work play just work on being a lil more creative