you wanna live

yo yo u wann live then step back
i'm picking heat like i'm waiting for the u.sa to attack
if want to live they get the fuck away
beuse i'm always haeing a shitty day
i'll smoke a once
then tell my hommies to bonce
becuse i don't want to kill my gs
i want to save my bullets for my enemies
like 50 cent i'll shoot any that walks
just like scarface i'll kill anyone whos talk
so leave me alone if you want to live
i kill motherfuckers like i'm on over drive

THis was not goot at all your flow wasnt on point. structure was probably the highlight of this piece, and thats not good. also you need more lines i think the minimum is like 16 or someting like that, and you need two links to oms that you left feed on. but back to the verse. there was no wordplay at all. elevate.

i just made that shit of the top of my head

you fucking suck b!

yea, wrong account,

but you still fuckin suck B!