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That was the first poem I have ever read. It was pretty nice I liked the emotion put into it @ the hate of yellow things. I don't know much more 'bout poetry so I can't say much more besides the fact that I enjoyed this. Very good keep writin.
ok, well youre lucky im leaving feed, normally if people PM me with links i ignore them... well... where to start! the concept was ok, BUT i wasnt too sure about your layout, it made it awkward to follow in places, also it seemed a little on the long side for me to keep interest, saying that though im not one for poems normally, overall id say this was ok, nothing that stands out though... keep doing your thing bruv
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Thanks for leaving feed.
I like this. The imagery was great. I mostly Njoi'd the play in the scheme. The description was excellent. The way everything lined up was nice. I Njoi'd this myself.It was a great read.
This was overall Good.
Defiant Lyricist? Meh never heard of 'em you sure that was me?
Yeah, didn't you used to have a Kanye West avatar?
Anyway, thanks for the feed.
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