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Unknown Talent
Unknown Talent
My body trembling, blood rushing in all directions of my body
Butterflies trapped in the midpoint of my stomach fluttering
Its wings as I memorize the lyrics to this song as the crowd
Stands in silence before I make my presences on stage, Shroud
In fear promising myself none mistakes what so ever. Beat
Begins and DJ introduces me before stepping my feet
On stages, hearing no sounds of hands clapping or any voice
Shouting a positive reply. The light falls on me, I make my choice
To spit some lyrics. Out of know where words flying out my mouth
As I shout out loud the sounds of a true artist with talent, turning south
Of the crowd spitting hot lyrics in away I never have expressed
Amazed noticing the crowd jumping, they repeat my name. Possessed
With the talent of an unknown artist with the heart burning for Success
Crowd wanting more of this amazing talent that I have just transgress
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your avatar is annoying as fuck
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tru but i like it
up for feed
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this is a ok pice and i think that you should of made it longer but its cool anyway
so yeah stay up
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The first half of this was pretty fucking dope. It kind of fell off towards the end due to improper use of vocabulary.. But all in all, not a bad piece. It seemed inspired at first.. Did this really happen? Was it you trying to motivate yourself? What was it? Just writing? No matter the inspiration, it was still a good piece.. Could have been longer though.
Do me a favor and hit my piece up? I need some good constructive feedback... so don't hold back.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=303861
