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yo i sit in my room
do nothing
but play with my broom
my life is so boring
all i do is eat salami
cause its my favorite food
aight dood?
i like to mack mad chickens
fuck them
fuck chicken licken
you eat the cock
im so jacked
my arms are like a rock
no i do not have rabies
but i like to make babies
and i rape homeless people
i liek dogs i like beagles
my wife is a seagul...and shes fine
good thing she mine dawg.
what do you guys think, im a beginner so i need advice
wow... umm.. how can i say this without making you cry...
read some LLL battles or some dope topicals and then come back...
i really hope for your sake that this is a joke...
i second what step said plus i hope ur name is a part of that joke
ROFL i didnt even notice his name was white50cent :P
just keep trying and hero worship is bad like...specially 50 cent...he was good not no more....Just read a couple of oms and stuff and start buliding up an idea of how to go about things. Also pick a topic and use worldy issues subtly to tie sub-topics into your topic. Overall, you have work to do so carry on striving...Stay up.
this is just not a open mic you gotta have flow or some its like 4 words a line
need 2 links
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Originally Posted by theXwhite50centX
Rotfl..
Very sad.
Change your name as well.
WTF?
LMFAOROTFL....
OH HELL NO...
Not only was this lame, but it sucked too.
Your a complete joke, from your name to the verse you just wrote.
100% WACK!
Check out the OM's in the HOF, and then try again some other time, cuz as it stands now, I wouldn't ever read shit else you dropped honestly. :(
This was horrible, elevate and then come back. :2thumb: