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Hello............again.
lol... round 2?
20
try n post to advance, but mics RIPpin? nah, u host w/ no plans
find out that spek-tore^,.< all he has is a ghost of a chance
vapor toxins when hoppin diccs, poison a fag to stop ur lips
dont body bluff bitchass, u jus a pushover...way off the cliff
go lie dude, ill take a knife & speks ass morphs into a wide pool
luccy u sentenced w/ execution...
...................sinces theres usually ^one word to describe you
ur flow sound menstrual, clownin ya shit to take the kit'n'caboodle
ur complicated mind's like ziti, cuz i run rings 'round ya noodle
feel thunder, the bitches tence, im a hunter for insolence
& last time i was a harsh impact on ur life...
....................................& ur STILL UNDER the influence
odd when the hype ends, ur clear conscience rots, mine rinse
its funny u certified urself "vet", and we all watched u license.
best believe, u bite & feed till u got ur wind tunnels filled in
ill thread ur wounds w/ barb wire, ud wish u had rumples stillskin!
optical lazer,..
....flare in ya home, see thru ur act, clearin' ya dome
theres nothin to sonnin' u, like ur air to the throne
i wish u said less, i know about the dildos in ur head rest
make this idiot battle himself, cuz its not wat he ex-speks
i propose this toast...into fairy dust, im about ta bury ya
quarenteen ur wacc ass, for tryin to channel energy...
...............................................liv ing in a remote area
Give me a break kid, i take it you wanna leave with a scar
ur winning our first battle sub par...but
dont disregard i almost beat ur entire verse..with only 1 good bar
what the hell dude, didnt i tell you, SH left you hanging; shit!
SHinc is redoing the roster again & guess what...ur still not making it
^^thats true yet rough,i jus received the pm sorry boberric i kno its tough
ur clean cut..& bleeding cuz ur not a pig.....ull just be slaughterd like one
Done? no ive just begun,you however were sond 6 lines in the arm dude
losses ima leave u on show,where ur not apart of the cast....
but the cast is apart of you.
Textis growing played,styles concepts they all expect less of of u kid
in LLL to do it,i went to abuse him,but got accused of writing stupid
seriously everything u spit is getting pwnd, its just hard to stand
i punch and land, n i do feel ur heart....barely pulsating in my hand
Im not a text head,so heres a lesson im testing...watch me diss
bob you need original concepts!
Funny thing is, hes texted longer...and i just tought him this!
the bell rings,dukes up for bob who sucks and me kill?...im about too
round 1 i slackd on this wack but for Round 2 im showin up..without you
20 lines? wow i wont lie im a bit fatigued of spitting n this league
but ur fully engergized.
cuz in ur textual training,u tried explaning an opener...is all u need.
Preseason is coming to a close, and who knows this could be the one
i see the future...
Yes i won but; m~m kicked me out LLL cuz my opponent wasnt good enuf
Upping for some votes?
**o and for the record...for boberrics sake...my custom title use to read*
... Certified Vet ...
just so there is no feelings..on why i changed it..
just wanted ot change it lol.
Had written a breakdown, oh well
V/ Speks
Why?
Bob dropped alot of played ish I liked your lie sinse bar, but not much else, was either avg or wording killed it. Oh and try make popular/well known objects for your metas/wordplay, dayum I had to google that dayum ziti....made me hungry too....hmmmm ziti looks fuckin good......
Speks, few good ish, even w/ Bob taking the best bar of the battle you came aight, seriously need to work on your wording though, your showing some potential if you do. If you dont verses will linger longer in the 'need better wording' bracket.
Thank you D.
1-0 me.
Upping for some more votes.
Keep the fun bus rolling :)
Okay..
Spekz, i enjoyed reading your verse, i liked your style of writing, your verse flowed together nicely and you varied the theme of you punches not jus a single style throughout, i though you had some witty stuff in there, some nice concepts, some not so good but an overall consistent drop.wording is deff somthing you should spend more time on but im not great at that either.lol....overall i felt your drop was decent.
BOb..yeh, you came ok too, your stuff didnt flow quite as well..but i found a few played bars in there..you too had some nice concepts and all i would say is wording again, but on the whole i just liked spekz verse more, less played and more originality..
so.....vote speks
plz could you leave feed on my battle wit vylint jus for some constructive shit.
Okay this is how it goes..
Bob, WTF @ you. Two weeks in a row of this whack shit. STOP running in circles and get right to the punch. Just come out with it. I saw some stuff I liked from you, like the noodle line and others..but not much here. Not a very good verse from you, but still barely decent.
Spekz, I liked your verse. I liked alot of it in the beggining, it grabbed me. You came off harsh, like you wanna stay here. You started to come off a lil wittier near the end which you should have done in the beggining to end stronger. But I liked your verse, and you've showed me that you deserve to be here, but not that you'll do well against the others, you still gotta get to that level. But you did enuff to win here.
v. Spekz
Bobberic
vapor toxins when hoppin diccs, poison a fag to stop ur lips
dont body bluff bitchass, u jus a pushover...way off the cliff
that was played as fuck
feel thunder, the bitches tence, im a hunter for insolence
& last time i was a harsh impact on ur life...
....................................& ur STILL UNDER the influence
that was worded pretty bad i.m.o
propose this toast...into fairy dust, im about ta bury ya
quarenteen ur wacc ass, for tryin to channel energy...
...............................................liv ing in a remote area
i hate lines with a million dots before.. just stretch it
Nice parts.
odd when the hype ends, ur clear conscience rots, mine rinse
its funny u certified urself "vet", and we all watched u license.
[b] if lie since is the wordplay then that was good /b]
Vs.
Spekz.
Give me a break kid, i take it you wanna leave with a scar
ur winning our first battle sub par...but
dont disregard i almost beat ur entire verse..with only 1 good bar
the rhyme scheme is kinda weird.. 7 the personal seemed bland
Textis growing played,styles concepts they all expect less of of u kid
in LLL to do it,i went to abuse him,but got accused of writing stupid
punch was bad there.
Nice parts.
Done? no ive just begun,you however were sond 6 lines in the arm dude
losses ima leave u on show,where ur not apart of the cast....
but the cast is apart of you.
pretty funny, good wordplay even though ive seen it before
what the hell dude, didnt i tell you, SH left you hanging; shit!
SHinc is redoing the roster again & guess what...ur still not making it
decent ish there
v- speks, felt he didnt make as bad as mistakes as bob and had 2 bars that i felt as to bobs 1.
odd when the hype ends, ur clear conscience rots, mine rinse
its funny u certified urself "vet", and we all watched u license.
vs.
Done? no ive just begun,you however were sond 6 lines in the arm dude
losses ima leave u on show,where ur not apart of the cast....
but the cast is apart of you.
Overall/-
Bob:Wording hurt ur verse.thats it.Good concepts..maybe sum were a bit played.but still..work on wording.
Speks:Ur wording seems a lil more effective than bob's...not much more..but regardless..U had a couple decent lines..the one I quoted is good..but still 'Cast' Concepts have been used to many times...but nice lil flip on that..
IMO Speks had an overall consistant verse..while bob had that line that made me say"Y didnt I think of that?"...
No hate...
V/-Spek.tator
Bobberic ive seen you come better in fl this was a rushed and un witty verse you really had nothing that stood out to me ill give you the vet line but that is it. Spekz you really took the advice of what the people had to say and thats a good because it worked for you, you just have to come a little more creative and your set
vote..spekz