Split- A Good Song

So yeah, this right here is the product of about 60 minutes of writing and recording, and it's not tooooo bad if I do say so myself.. Toying with the notion of perhaps recording it at the production studio, but I 'unno.. Anyways, this songs about a girl that I was kinda involved with that lead me on for a while, all dishonest with it and shit.. I'm really not that upset about it, I was just lacking inspiration in all other aspects of my life so I used her.. Sorry, girl... haha.. pretty good though, I think the lyrics are definately going to be what stands out the most here... Lemme know what you think with a link and I'll get atcha.


http://www.soundclick.com/bands/song...songID=5077843

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upp... leave some links kids.

stop sleeping faggots.. leave links and I'll reply in full detail.

it was nice. i always wonder most of the tracks i peep from you are long verses, which are iite but they do get repetitive sometimes. try going with the normal 16 bar/chorus/16bar/chorus formula.

but this shit was arite off the top of my head i remember the grass was greener on the other side of commen sense line.

^Oh, I've got a few of those too.. I've got one that's being mastered right now called "Soldier For Something"... should be pretty dope. thanks for the insight bro.

Piano Was Sick On The Beat.. Good Quality Sound.. Flow Is Definetley On Point.. Good Bar Game Too.. And U Said U Did This In 60 Minutes.. Nice! Keep Hustlin

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Originally Posted by Oneness

you remind me of sage francis and slug mixed,i dont really care for your style its not what i listen to, but for what you are trying to do its good

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word, certainly appreciate it. I realize not everybody is going to be down with what I'm trying to accomplish, but I do hope there will be more people like you who can at least respect it.

*listenin'*

Damn man, that beat is ill. Like I said before, your style is so unique man, shits sick. The lyrics were deep as fuck, I like the approach you took. It was a very humble anger.. thats the emotion I got from it. A very subtle, but very angriness.

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so long, be strong and peace be with you
for now I'll be inside the memory
trying to forget you

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That was really dope. So much depth in your style. I can really see you in the underground with Sage Francis and all of them.. very nice ending. In my opinion, re-record your first verse, write up a chorus and 2nd verse.. finish the track. It would be really sick man. Props.

I love your voice duke, I def love ya style though. your flow is pretty solid man, nice job. The lyrics is very verbal I'm def feelin this. This beat is hot as well. what oneness said i kinda agree except I'm the type dude who listens to that kinda style. Nice job with this track man I'm def feelin it. I'm not sure if you did dubs or not but if you did up the volume or do dubs lol. but good job man. keep it raw 1

Ya delivery and flow wuz on point.... was feelin ya style and lyrics were straight -- ya multis and vocab wuz also decent.... i think sometimes ya forced ya flow but most of it wuz on point------ Shit thats all i can think of since it wuz one verse

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