Winner Gets Heavyweight ...
Make Sure U Read The Rules.
Winner Gets Heavyweight ...
Make Sure U Read The Rules.
Checkin' in to win. How many lines you wanting ? We could go the full 30 if that's what you feel like doing.
Check-in.... 20lines=20bars...
that's what I will produce, match me please...
peace, props, and respect...
lookin' for a good battle, nothin' but respect due playah..
OuTtIe...
Mind check'em wit fine lines, reck'em like timed rhyme mines!::
leave him blind, like crooks wishin' ta find books for competition!!::
duke can't cook unless he look's at what he's missin' for hook's!::
now I'm fishin' this bitch that took tha bate and switched positions!!::
he fake wit an alias, a Jake tha Snake that take's away ya cake!::
and you can Quote that^ shit.. but remember, I wrote that^ spit!!::
On a 56K, I slay pray like they unaware I choke chicken's in dismay!::
givin' NO thanks ta grace, I just want to say... I think ya signiture's GAY!!::
I'm racking points, subtracting vertabrae and collapsing on ya joints!::
smokin' ya points, B-LOW ya brain, and maim Quotients mainframe!!::
Cut his dingle-ling off, give it to a midgit!. besides they're used to short-shit!::
Admit it!! Bitch coppied my humor, piled into Quotient computer files!!::
my styles uncircumsized, like critics you go down on Boys in the Hood!::
ya toys wish they could, fuckin' faggots get Shanks Dirty good'n bloody!!::
Now I'm hurtin' everybody cause ya flow comes after a massive disastah!::
Comin' off gangsta? ya only pound crack cause you scout backs wangsta!!::
I'm tha croc master outback, shittin' in public wherevah tha crowd's at!::
Now that takes tha gravy , He's lightweight? dawg we used to call you baby!!::
No way you gonna rape me, maybe? nope sorry kidd, I'm not ya lady!::
My whole faculty spits iLL immaculate scripts, this craftily ripped his to bits!!::
20 bars*edit cause I spelled his name wrong*<--my bad
peace, props, and much respect...
-I won't SAY shit else-
if you get it ya get it, if ya don't ya don't
Bloods and limbs, watch as Quo suddenly rips this shrimp
. . Cause I've never smacked someone so much. . like I'm an out of work Pimp/
And lets be honest RB, that's the dopest punch you've ever seen
. . The only way Dirt could double me. . would open my post and split the screen/
You'll never see the belt kid, but you will get to be slapped by the best
. . And I'd say your sister is pretty man. . but fuck incest/
Skillz told me I had a bye week, but I had no idea you'd be this whack
. . Cause like STDs I'm used to fighting dicks. . that fight back/
I won't even bother to try cause I know I'll win this battle sound
. . Cause I keep Dirt where it belongs man, in the ground/
Cut your eyeballs out with the same Shanks you used to still them puns
. . Kid's verse was so suspect. . it had a motive and a murder weapon !!/
That's some garabage spits, what the hell is with this shit ?
. . Kid climbed the staircase to heaven, tripped, and fell off of it/
This kid is done, Quo can't be denied of this there will be no intervention
. . Cause only time I see D.S. in lights is at a Dick Suckers convention/
Slam this bitch so hard it sets of car alarms, and give you a five. . 5 fingers across the eyes
. . I agree with your custom title man, Your verse was sharp as knives. . Butterknives/
Reservior dogs are going to work ? Well then get back to your corner bitch
. . Let me make this shit even. . [blah blah blah blah blah] <-- see that line kid ? You can HAVE it !!/
votequotient
Evaluation:
Dirty Shanks - You Had very Few Punches It Seems You Tried To Make Sense Out Of Some That Deeply Made No Sense at All.
I wasn`t really feeling your content, i would have liked to see a lot more complexity, then the normal your wack punches..
work on being creative,,,
That Had To Be The Most Played Line Next To Cum Lines.Quote:
Cut his dingle-ling off, give it to a midgit!. besides they're used to short-shit!::
Quotient :
Overall Better Verse, But Still Had A Few Weak Played Material Lines Such As The STD Line .
You Had OverPowering Punches, A Lot Of Quotables..
nice play off his name.Quote:
I won't even bother to try cause I know I'll win this battle sound
. . Cause I keep Dirt where it belongs man, in the ground/
Best Line Of This Battle.Quote:
That's some garabage spits, what the hell is with this shit ?
. . Kid climbed the staircase to heaven, tripped, and fell off of it/
Good Job Both Of You But, Dirty Shanks , I Feel You Didn`t Try.
Qoutient:
"Skillz told me I had a bye week, but I had no idea you'd be this whack
. . Cause like STDs I'm used to fighting dicks. . that fight back/
I won't even bother to try cause I know I'll win this battle sound
. . Cause I keep Dirt where it belongs man, in the ground/"
and:
"That's some garabage spits, what the hell is with this shit ?
. . Kid climbed the staircase to heaven, tripped, and fell off of it/"
Those were some of the best bars i have ever read on RB.....
Dirty Shanks:
Now that takes tha gravy , He's lightweight? dawg we used to call you baby!!::
this was the only line of your I liked, and the rest flowed nice, but the meta's sounded forced.
Anyways Good Battle, Quotient had me laughin through almost his whoel verse.
Vote: Qoutient.
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To be honest i really wasnt feeling this battle... Shanks, i thought you could have came alot harder.... It looked like you were trying to hard to use Multies but you forgot about the Punches...
Quotient... You had some decent punches but some were just played.... Its obvious you are from RnR, and no that is not the best punch ive ever seen... it was kind of weak.... but not all your punches were weak
fav lines
I won't even bother to try cause I know I'll win this battle sound
. . Cause I keep Dirt where it belongs man, in the ground/
The only way Dirt could double me. . would open my post and split the screen/
Vote: Quotient
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Originally posted by Evolve
To be honest i really wasnt feeling this battle... Shanks, i thought you could have came alot harder.... It looked like you were trying to hard to use Multies but you forgot about the Punches...
I looked thru Shanks verse 3 times trying to find a line that had a punch I could quote . . .
Shanks tight punches:::
. . . *yawn* . . .
Quotients tight punches:::
::. . Cause I've never smacked someone so much. . like I'm an out of work Pimp/
::. . The only way Dirt could double me. . would open my post and split the screen/
Shanks Wack/Played "punches" . . .
:::: Mind check'em wit fine lines, reck'em like timed rhyme mines!::
leave him blind, like crooks wishin' ta find books for competition!!::
duke can't cook unless he look's at what he's missin' for hook's!::
now I'm fishin' this bitch that took tha bate and switched positions!!::
he fake wit an alias, a Jake tha Snake that take's away ya cake!::
and you can Quote that^ shit.. but remember, I wrote that^ spit!!::
On a 56K, I slay pray like they unaware I choke chicken's in dismay!::
givin' NO thanks ta grace, I just want to say... I think ya signiture's GAY!!::
I'm racking points, subtracting vertabrae and collapsing on ya joints!::
smokin' ya points, B-LOW ya brain, and maim Quotients mainframe!!::
Cut his dingle-ling off, give it to a midgit!. besides they're used to short-shit!::
Admit it!! Bitch coppied my humor, piled into Quotient computer files!!::
my styles uncircumsized, like critics you go down on Boys in the Hood!::
ya toys wish they could, fuckin' faggots get Shanks Dirty good'n bloody!!::
Now I'm hurtin' everybody cause ya flow comes after a massive disastah!::
Comin' off gangsta? ya only pound crack cause you scout backs wangsta!!::
I'm tha croc master outback, shittin' in public wherevah tha crowd's at!::
Now that takes tha gravy , He's lightweight? dawg we used to call you baby!!::
No way you gonna rape me, maybe? nope sorry kidd, I'm not ya lady!::
My whole faculty spits iLL immaculate scripts, this craftily ripped his to bits!!::
Quotient Wack/Played "punches"::. . .
::. . And I'd say your sister is pretty man. . but fuck incest/
::. . I agree with your custom title man, Your verse was sharp as knives. . Butterknives/
::. . Let me make this shit even. . [blah blah blah blah blah] <-- see that line kid ? You can HAVE it !!/ (to many people end their battle with some kinda ending like this)
. . . As you can see Quotient had a much stronger verse . . . It seems like Dirty forgot that punches should be the main focus of any battle . . . Quotient had some nice punches but nothing that really made me say "Oh Shit" . . . good job tho y'all . . .
MY VOTE: Quotient
Not Voting, But Do Ya'll Honestly Think Quotient Punches Weren't Played?? LMFAO, They Were VERY VERY Played.......Don't Get Me Wrong, They Were Good, But Some Of Them We're Played More Than Fiddles On Concert Night...LMAO, I Crack Myself Up!!! Aha Ahahaha!!!!!!
-OuT-
Ok. . Thanks for coming out and helping your crew member sway. That was a key I didn't feel that I had to really try here. And I'm not from RnR. Hah. Thanks for that little dick-riding speech. Now please exit the thread and don't let the door hit ya where the good lord split ya.
Current votes: 4-0 My way.
This is not swaying. Just clearing up this faggot's problem.
i got no problem's...
I could beat you dawgie, I'm not trippin off this battle..
sometimes you win, and sometimes you lose..
I'm not gonna beef over stupid shit, I didn't come hard on this battle, I know.. I rushed it..
It's funny though...
M~M beat me in bars of war, and then I turn around and beat silence....:confused:
shit happends..
I'll battle you another time, maybe for another chance at heavyweight, next time it may mean somthin to me...
also.. WTF is ya alias.. I want to know who I lost to please..
peace, props, and much respect...
I'm. . MC Peter Braid E aka Potent aka Element. . former Bar Tenderz member. . blah blah blah. Been around for a while now. Heh.