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we meet again
You gonna show this time?
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
Put ya faith into these lines, and than pray ya don't fall short,
cuz the last time ya showed pride, it was to a priest without remorse.
I've seen Ricardo talk gay, but the way you walk, it's strange,
that dick in ya sig makes me sick, white it puts this prick to shame!
Antisocial? Shit, ya crew died quicker than a slut in a horror flick,
if this was elm street, you'd die in the scene before opening credits.
No mercy, and I'm burning this nobody with wording that scars,
and part of me feels sorry, but it's not my first time hurting retards.
Where is your god now?
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
you sweet, but thats something your team just shouldnt know
but DW's not the only fagot in that sugar bowl
R.I.P deathwish, nah, i really wish him well
cuz when i hit em, it'll flip em, right into a wishin well
you were predicted to lose, dont mean to be a tattle teller
if you wanna know how much votes youll get? solve your battle record
dont know if crew votes count
Vote bless ... he attacked his opponent a lot more than his opponent attacked him... i have him winning in punches and wordplay.. albeit, death had better structure on his verse, he needed more than that to win. my advice to death, work on wordplay ... simple wordplay probably would have won this for you.
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
weak opener
Put ya faith into these lines, and than pray ya don't fall short,
cuz the last time ya showed pride, it was to a priest without remorse.
not feeling this
I've seen Ricardo talk gay, but the way you walk, it's strange,
that dick in ya sig makes me sick, white it puts this prick to shame!
weak punch
Antisocial? Shit, ya crew died quicker than a slut in a horror flick,
if this was elm street, you'd die in the scene before opening credits.
weakkkk
No mercy, and I'm burning this nobody with wording that scars,
and part of me feels sorry, but it's not my first time hurting retards.
makes no sense
vs
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
weak
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
weak again
you sweet, but thats something your team just shouldnt know
but DW's not the only fagot in that sugar bowl
weak
R.I.P deathwish, nah, i really wish him well
cuz when i hit em, it'll flip em, right into a wishin well
not feeling
you were predicted to lose, dont mean to be a tattle teller
if you wanna know how much votes youll get? solve your battle record
weakk
vote deathwish, BDL was weaker
Antisocial? Shit, ya crew died quicker than a slut in a horror flick,
if this was elm street, you'd die in the scene before opening credits.
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
vote for deathwish, toss up, but death's verse was better overall..great battle
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
Solid opener 7/10
Put ya faith into these lines, and than pray ya don't fall short,
cuz the last time ya showed pride, it was to a priest without remorse.
nice hook here , again 7/10
I've seen Ricardo talk gay, but the way you walk, it's strange,
that dick in ya sig makes me sick, white it puts this prick to shame!
ok 6/10
Antisocial? Shit, ya crew died quicker than a slut in a horror flick,
if this was elm street, you'd die in the scene before opening credits.
meh kinda weak 5/10
No mercy, and I'm burning this nobody with wording that scars,
and part of me feels sorry, but it's not my first time hurting retards.
meh closer 6/10
31/50
vs
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
weak opener 5/10
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
meh ok 5/10
you sweet, but thats something your team just shouldnt know
but DW's not the only fagot in that sugar bowl
no 4/10
R.I.P deathwish, nah, i really wish him well
cuz when i hit em, it'll flip em, right into a wishin well
creative 6/10
you were predicted to lose, dont mean to be a tattle teller
if you wanna know how much votes youll get? solve your battle record
meh personal 6/10
26/50
Deathwish wins.
deathwish
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
lol nice concept to the np reference
Put ya faith into these lines, and than pray ya don't fall short,
cuz the last time ya showed pride, it was to a priest without remorse.
lol nice again
I've seen Ricardo talk gay, but the way you walk, it's strange,
that dick in ya sig makes me sick, white it puts this prick to shame!
nah wording could of been better on finisher
Antisocial? Shit, ya crew died quicker than a slut in a horror flick,
if this was elm street, you'd die in the scene before opening credits.
nah
No mercy, and I'm burning this nobody with wording that scars,
and part of me feels sorry, but it's not my first time hurting retards.
made me laugh a bit maybe cuz this worded good and overall concept was good
Bless
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
good concept overall but felt np attempt was forced
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
ok lol
you sweet, but thats something your team just shouldnt know
but DW's not the only fagot in that sugar bowl
this coulda had more potential here when it came to the finisher
R.I.P deathwish, nah, i really wish him well
cuz when i hit em, it'll flip em, right into a wishin well
nah
you were predicted to lose, dont mean to be a tattle teller
if you wanna know how much votes youll get? solve your battle record
nah
Well i felt Deathwish had this with his first two bars he incorperated the np references nice and added a little humor. Bless didnt come as hard here had a lot of misses.
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How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
-cool hit. couldve connected harder if ur set up had something to do w/ him bein gay
I've seen Ricardo talk gay, but the way you walk, it's strange,
that dick in ya sig makes me sick, white it puts this prick to shame!
-mild hit
vs
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
-u lack effort in ur setup but overall the n/p is ok
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
-again effort lacked in the setup but hit was iight
you were predicted to lose, dont mean to be a tattle teller
if you wanna know how much votes youll get? solve your battle record
-i liked this.. the 3-3 = 0 votes cool concept
v/ bless. i thought his end hits were stronger.
death had better setup n flow but bless packed more sting..d had the first 2 bars were iight then he feel off.. bless felt lil more consistent with his punch
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
vs
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
your a booty bandit, girls see the felon in your face
the only time they blowin wish is wax meltin on a cake
Bless fell off after the first two punches. It wasnt bad after that, but just not as hard.
Death just didnt come with anything harsh here. What I quoted wasnt even great, but was the best of his verse.
v/Bless
How could ya compete with me, I'm freed by my own beliefs,
Bless the lord? Shit, i see ya on both knees more than once a week!
vs
winnings a wish you wont get, after i lay text
you wont see v/D like i'm practicing safe sex
Ok, I would've easily given this to BDL after reading the verses but I went back to reassess some things. I would've quoted the blowing wish line but after I read it again, it doesnt even making sense. "Only time they blowin wish is wax melting on a cake"...lol really? I get the whole birthday cake/candle concept but your wording was completely HORRIBLE there. The battle record thing was ok too but its just too straight forward for me. Death only had that one bar in here verse that I liked. So both have the same amount of quoteables, so I went to other categories, and I feel that Death's verse was better polished in terms of wording, structure and flow. So...
v/Death