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10 Lines due before this day is done, or half an hour after we both check.
I'm checking now, don't check unless you're gonna have your verse done in 30 minutes. Check due in 10 and 1/2 hours, verse due in 11.
What a fucking bitch, I'll knock you out with a single slap
Trying to act gangsta and shit, you couldn't pop off a pringle's cap
I can tell you why this flaming queer wont get laid for his remaining years
Cause-this-bitch plucked-his-dick out, and he was only aiming "fur" hairs
His best verse is worse than the crappiest verse of all time
If ignorance is bliss, then you must be the happiest person alive
If you spit fire its cause you've been possessed by a retarded demon
The only time that you're really raising kids is when you gargle semen
This cocksucker flipping the script? Even the thought of it is make belief
cause the only way we'll get a "cum"back from you is if we scrape your teeth
ekhsdkfh983y894u;o4 <-thats my baby dissing u with a diaper full of shit
Fresh can't connect with dirty bars, unless he cleaned it with an open mitt
kick to the left, kick to the right, left jab right jab, double uppercut
I just leaved Fresh between 4 crosses...
...But I didnt gotta say that his user name says enough
Was that your best try it doesnt seem like you were trying guy
Maybe you are a Titan and I'm a mouse trying to be a samurai
but dont ditch the effort, cuz I'll just leave u dead up in one
this giant couldnt grasp the ghost and face me like a killa son
so u Better protect ya neck with all your fuckin attitude
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8OkpRK2_gVs
(^^0:55 - 0:57)cause I'll elevate my lines and this is what Ill do 2 u
His best verse is worse than the crappiest verse of all time
If ignorance is bliss, then you must be the happiest person alive
If you spit fire its cause you've been possessed by a retarded demon
The only time that you're really raising kids is when you gargle semen
This cocksucker flipping the script? Even the thought of it is make belief
cause the only way we'll get a "cum"back from you is if we scrape your teeth
^gross af lol
vs
but dont ditch the effort, cuz I'll just leave u dead up in one
this giant couldnt grasp the ghost and face me like a killa son
^nice
Didn't really feel the youtube clip cause it took away from the punch being direct. just use more creativity in your concepts like u did in that bar I quoted. Fresh, you are a nasty ass dude man lol. the bars I quoted were funny, but not hard punches. the first was coo tho. Just keep thinking of fresher material tho.
v. fresh
This cocksucker flipping the script? Even the thought of it is make belief
cause the only way we'll get a "cum"back from you is if we scrape your teeth
vs.
nada
in reality this was pretty one sided for me…Fresh took this with ease…deff wasn't feeling all that gibberish shit…to me Fresh's verse was just way more superior in every aspect…
V - Fresh
up 1
Fresh
What a fucking bitch, I'll knock you out with a single slap
Trying to act gangsta and shit, you couldn't pop off a pringle's cap
Played no hate but 90's concept lol
I can tell you why this flaming queer wont get laid for his remaining years
Cause-this-bitch plucked-his-dick out, and he was only aiming "fur" hairs
nah wasn't feeling this wp attempt
His best verse is worse than the crappiest verse of all time
If ignorance is bliss, then you must be the happiest person alive
basic
If you spit fire its cause you've been possessed by a retarded demon
The only time that you're really raising kids is when you gargle semen
nah
This cocksucker flipping the script? Even the thought of it is make belief
cause the only way we'll get a "cum"back from you is if we scrape your teeth
funny but come on basic wp a cum punch???
child
ekhsdkfh983y894u;o4 <-thats my baby dissing u with a diaper full of shit
Fresh can't connect with dirty bars, unless he cleaned it with an open mitt
nah
kick to the left, kick to the right, left jab right jab, double uppercut
I just leaved Fresh between 4 crosses...
...But I didnt gotta say that his user name says enough
not bad but ive seen these flips before
Was that your best try it doesnt seem like you were trying guy
Maybe you are a Titan and I'm a mouse trying to be a samurai
nah
but dont ditch the effort, cuz I'll just leave u dead up in one
this giant couldnt grasp the ghost and face me like a killa son
ok decent wp
so u Better protect ya neck with all your fuckin attitude
lot of basic hits from both. fresh had some old ass wp but I guess stayed consistent punchwise. Child that ghost face wp was decent but overall missed punches.
V/Fresh but needs to get more creative as far as wp goes
what is wp @joeboston
wordplay for example cum/come it was just too basic of a wordplay fam @xXFresHXx
Fresh
What a fucking bitch, I'll knock you out with a single slap
Trying to act gangsta and shit, you couldn't pop off a pringle's cap
haha i guess, good for you i see your elevating.. but not feeling it
I can tell you why this flaming queer wont get laid for his remaining years
Cause-this-bitch plucked-his-dick out, and he was only aiming "fur" hairs
Nahh dude make it flow better
His best verse is worse than the crappiest verse of all time
If ignorance is bliss, then you must be the happiest person alive
Ehhh nah miss
If you spit fire its cause you've been possessed by a retarded demon
The only time that you're really raising kids is when you gargle semen
nah, if we really think about it thats sucking dick not fucking be wittier
This cocksucker flipping the script? Even the thought of it is make belief
cause the only way we'll get a "cum"back from you is if we scrape your teeth
Yes I like the closer well done look what you did here and use this more
Felt 1 out of 5 bars
Child
ekhsdkfh983y894u;o4 <-thats my baby dissing u with a diaper full of shit
Fresh can't connect with dirty bars, unless he cleaned it with an open mitt
nah dude wtf dont do fillers like that cmon now
kick to the left, kick to the right, left jab right jab, double uppercut
I just leaved Fresh between 4 crosses...
...But I didnt gotta say that his user name says enough
Should have worded this alot better mang good idea though
Was that your best try it doesnt seem like you were trying guy
Maybe you are a Titan and I'm a mouse trying to be a samurai
Nah dude dont do that, if your gonna flip it flip it better
but dont ditch the effort, cuz I'll just leave u dead up in one
this giant couldnt grasp the ghost and face me like a killa son
Good wordplay, nice job here
so u Better protect ya neck with all your fuckin attitude
cause I'll elevate my lines and this is what Ill do 2 u
Ehh I dont mean to be rude but the only way I can put this is to be rude. Dont Do This!! Closers are so important, dont do this man cmon now.
Felt 1 out of 5 bars
Explanation
This is the most even battle ive seen to be honest it seems as though Fresh understand punches more. I am trying not to be rude by saying this but Child you need to be more mature.. Ehh i dont know how to say it but I like the use of word play good job with that I can see that both parties are elevating but due to the circumstance of Fresh coming with more consistent punches and no lines that made me go wtf never this he takes it in my opinion.
V/Fresh
Conclusion
Both have elevated quite a bit I look forward to reading more of your battles.