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LLL Official Rules & Regulations
GENERAL RULES
CHECK IN DUE: WEDNESDAY @ 11:59 PM EST
VERSUS DUE: FRIDAY @ 11:59 PM EST
LINE LIMIT: Minimum of 10 lines, Maximum of 16
Easy win, 1-2 here we come lol.
@$in City 10lines post early.
In...I'll post sometime before the deadline...10s cool tho
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Your the Sally type & you show signs of fatigue
This Man would get beat by a Gal in real life .. then sign out the league
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
Post office bars that will stamp his chin
I wish there was a way to give you votes, so you actually had a chance to win
is you retarded?Quote:
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
either that or you smokin crack w/ ur remedial wack punches
when I eat gravy gonna know the true meaning of packed lunches
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
speakin of the hoe, she getting quickies w/ my niggas and sluts
after I fuck I'll smoke a pack, then put her pussy on the cigarette butts
u must be drunk to ever think you could rhyme with $in,
right now my verse makin him green with envy like a heineken
chicks w/ beer goggles cant stand gravesite, who the fuck gassed u P?
Women love me for days..
but w/ you not even God Himself could stay passed 3!!
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Nice
Your the Sally type & you show signs of fatigue
This Man would get beat by a Gal in real life .. then sign out the league
Feeling it
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Not bad
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
lol Nice
Post office bars that will stamp his chin
I wish there was a way to give you votes, so you actually had a chance to win
Meh not feeling this
vs
either that or you smokin crack w/ ur remedial wack punches
when I eat gravy gonna know the true meaning of packed lunches
Not bad, gravy is a little forced tho
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
Could have brought more angles to this
speakin of the hoe, she getting quickies w/ my niggas and sluts
after I fuck I'll smoke a pack, then put her pussy on the cigarette butts
nah
u must be drunk to ever think you could rhyme with $in,
right now my verse makin him green with envy like a heineken
not much of punch here
chicks w/ beer goggles cant stand gravesite, who the fuck gassed u P?
Women love me for days..
but w/ you not even God Himself could stay passed 3!!
yo started off iight w/ grave sight but the punch fell off
Seems Sin City is still shaking the rust off. Packed had a solid verse only one of his bars didn't hit imo.
v/PG
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
Vs.
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
Pretty easy W for Packed. Sin I wasn't feeling most of your lines, bro. Concepts were ok, but your execution was weak.
V/Packed.
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Pretty good
Your the Sally type & you show signs of fatigue
This Man would get beat by a Gal in real life .. then sign out the league
Ok, sign outta what league in real life tho, idk
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Nice
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
Ok
Post office bars that will stamp his chin
I wish there was a way to give you votes, so you actually had a chance to win
Nah
Vs...
Originally Posted by Packed Graves
Easy win, 1-2 here we come lol.
is you retarded?
either that or you smokin crack w/ ur remedial wack punches
when I eat gravy gonna know the true meaning of packed lunches
Idk gravy was off but good attempt
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
Lol, pretty nice
speakin of the hoe, she getting quickies w/ my niggas and sluts
after I fuck I'll smoke a pack, then put her pussy on the cigarette butts
Ok
u must be drunk to ever think you could rhyme with $in,
right now my verse makin him green with envy like a heineken
Not feelin thus much
chicks w/ beer goggles cant stand gravesite, who the fuck gassed u P?
Women love me for days..
but w/ you not even God Himself could stay passed 3!!
Ok..
Idk sin had a lot of name play good attempts n jabs while I think pg had harder hits n a bit more creativity in his verse, not a blow out but pg got this IMO...
Vote packed graves
Your the Sally type & you show signs of fatigue
This Man would get beat by a Gal in real life .. then sign out the league
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Vs
Nothing
One sided battle here. Sin had a couple ok concepts but they weren't executed well. Packed came decent. Sin King is forced AF tho LOL. The Sal/Gal was funny to me. Party City was cool also. Packed did enough to take this win.
v/PG
Opener was forced and closer was weak...the rest was good...party city was dope
Vs
Moms is horny was decent but too simple...rest was wack
This was really one sided..packed didnt come his best but had some bars
V/pg
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Your the Sally type & you show signs of fatigue
This Man would get beat by a Gal in real life .. then sign out the league
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
vs
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
Sin had some aight shots that didnt land that well while Graves had some nice flips and a more consistent verse. he still gay af tho.
v. pg
You gave me a weak match I could hope for more
But since you gave me $in, King- Il leave his body doing that to the ocean floor
Girls love me & invite me over to most their homes
if girls wanna go to your Party, City- it's for supplies so they can host their own
Faggot, I would talk about ass & my booty craze
but The father that had to Raise Sin- passed him down all of his fruity ways
vs
you could never rock a concert, u wack nigga, ya lines is corny
only time you'll ever see a packed house is when ya moms is horny
Sin: You need to step up on your concepts. You lack the KO effect to your punchlines. Alot of stuff came off basic or played to me. It was how you worded it. I felt no reaction from reading more of your lines. I'd advise you to read your opponents best bars. See how he set the jokes up to deliver the impact. It will take you time to get the hang of it. Rome wasn't built in a day!
PG : This was one of your better moments. You aren't too consistent, but here is the PG i like to see. You hard a clever harsh appeal to your wording. I liked alot of your bars, while some did come off as a statement.
v/ PG