6 Bars/12 lines
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@Sajiro make sure u vote on two battles and copy and paste the links here during when u check in
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6 Bars/12 lines
Due In 24
@Sajiro make sure u vote on two battles and copy and paste the links here during when u check in
Good Luck!!!!
Thank you! I will get it soon as possible and votes too.
check good luck @Sajiro
heres my 12
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Your chicks a huge slut she definitely needs some help
All that dick shes like a pilot in a cockpit,we just hope u die in the French Alps
You beat me by yourself? must be lying through your teeth
cuz when they talk about Jiro there are no signs of beef
Your in to religious beliefs and zodiac signs, fuck if ur a spritual dude
If a chicks Cancer his dumb ass would go the Angelina route and remove their fallopian tubes
All his life he proved he sucked any oppurtunity he had went out the window
Thought Family Matters, but no one shows this child support like Eddie Winslow
One night will turn ur chick into a nympho straight fucking no flirting
The way im shooting game she'll leave ya cuz ur at home playing the ones in first person
Its for certain your a bitch your hands always up on that surrender shit
So how can they Saji hard when he aint got the mind of a known terrorist
You stupid can't kill me, softer than water, call me a dope slaughter,
You are not rapper or a star, you are not better than your grandmother,
She drinkin' da grey goose and killed your rhymes with the mother goose,
You are wack dawg, no wonder you goin through life is to study da Drake,
When I catch you sit on the barber chair, I will fuck up your haircut,
You are not cool, smashin' this fool into a billion pieces,
Ain't dope, or a mob, dare you to rob,I knocked at your eyes with my jesus piece,
Bleeding 'n blind, you screaming like a fag,I don't care who you are,
I destory ur music,when I told em' you are using the auto-tune,
You need stop, you ain't spark at this top,
I'm shark hammer I headbutt you every time,I make bullet smell,
blasting with my nine, I got you stuck, to do cowboy boogie dance...
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Vote plz... good battle.
Ready for blind votes
Thought tbis battle was kinda one sided....
Boston, you structured your verse really well. You had a solid verse all around. Very consistent with the punches and had nice set ups to help the impact of the punchlines. Also your schemes were slick and kept on with the flow which helped your barz pop.
Saj- in spots i thought you had some decent shots, but in the middle of the verse you totally lost me. It didnt seem to rhyme or have any direction. No real concept or set up to a punchline. Kinda statement type of barz that dont have much impact. Try to structure your barz in a little bettercof shape and that should help.
Vote - Boston
Joe Boston:
this was okQuote:
Your chicks a huge slut she definitely needs some help
All that dick shes like a pilot in a cockpit,we just hope u die in the French Alps
this didn't hit too hard, and some gyros do have beefQuote:
You beat me by yourself? must be lying through your teeth
cuz when they talk about Jiro there are no signs of beef
this was goodQuote:
Your in to religious beliefs and zodiac signs, fuck if ur a spritual dude
If a chicks Cancer his dumb ass would go the Angelina route and remove their fallopian tubes
nice, but i felt like the first line should've been more integrated with the secondQuote:
All his life he proved he sucked any oppurtunity he had went out the window
Thought Family Matters, but no one shows this child support like Eddie Winslow
this was also goodQuote:
One night will turn ur chick into a nympho straight fucking no flirting
The way im shooting game she'll leave ya cuz ur at home playing the ones in first person
I didn't get what you were trying to say here but this bar looked weak in my opinion.Quote:
Its for certain your a bitch your hands always up on that surrender shit
So how can they Saji hard when he aint got the mind of a known terrorist
Sajiro:
this was too basicQuote:
You stupid can't kill me, softer than water, call me a dope slaughter,
You are not rapper or a star, you are not better than your grandmother
Your rhymes were all over the place dude. You could've/should've worded the first two lines better. Again this was all basic and not hard hitting.Quote:
She drinkin' da grey goose and killed your rhymes with the mother goose,
You are wack dawg, no wonder you goin through life is to study da Drake,
When I catch you sit on the barber chair, I will fuck up your haircut,
You are not cool, smashin' this fool into a billion pieces,
Ain't dope, or a mob, dare you to rob,I knocked at your eyes with my jesus piece,
The first line sounded like filler to me. Second line left me wondering who are the " em' " you wrote about. They came out of nowhere.Quote:
Bleeding 'n blind, you screaming like a fag,I don't care who you are,
I destory ur music,when I told em' you are using the auto-tune,
You need stop, you ain't spark at this top,
I'm shark hammer I headbutt you every time,I make bullet smell,
blasting with my nine, I got you stuck, to do cowboy boogie dance...
I saw a couple of rhymes but still nothing hitting Joe, just confusing me.
Joe got a few good shots in. Sajiro didn't shine here...
My vote goes to Joe Boston.
rofl @ saji hard
rofl even more @ it working for jb because he'd actually pronounce it saw jihad in his boston accent
other than that, not really feeling anything in this battle but jb definitely had the better attempts
v/boston
All his life he proved he sucked any oppurtunity he had went out the window
Thought Family Matters, but no one shows this child support like Eddie Winslow
One night will turn ur chick into a nympho straight fucking no flirting
The way im shooting game she'll leave ya cuz ur at home playing the ones in first person
This was ok, luckily for u the Saj raps like b rad g from the bu. Saj don't do things like rhyme piece with pieces, and don't have bars that don't even rhyme. Neither of u had metaphores, Wordplay, nameplay, no multis to help ur flows.. Fl is crazy, ppl were suppose to get better at rapbattling on rb but front lines has been shit for years now..
V/Joe
Cool read, JOE had some good stuff wouldn't classify anything as LOTB though cuz everything was consistent, Saj a lot of misses and corny punches. Nothing was hard hitting tbh and a lot of the stuff I just wasn't feeling. The commas were a struggle for me cuz I actuallh pause when I see s comma so that messed up the flow drastically for me. So my vote here goes to JOE for having the better verse. Saj read some LLL battles and work on your craft b.