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@B Dot LESNAR
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10-12 lines due this Sunday
Match first to drop
@B Dot LESNAR
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B Dot LESNAR aka Broke Lesnar aka ALIENS
Quote:
Originally Posted by B Dot LESNAR
Damn ur old..
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish
leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
@B Dot LESNAR
sorry i went 18 lines. i'll edit down if u want or u can match.
it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snoozedQuote:
Originally Posted by plethora
talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
Pleth: ufc days, anecdotal was fire, Griffith observatory.
Vs
Lesnar: tendinitis was dope, cobra, unoriginal name flips, Elysian lol, rag doll.
Overall: once I read pleths verse def thought he got this, but I was very wrong, if this is the same Lesnar I know then it's dope to see dude battling again.. but yea les clearly outpunched pleth threw the whole verse.. this lived up to be a dope battle don't get me wrong, but some of pleths lines fell flat, for everyone of pleths misses les had a killer personal. Dope battle tho
Vote: b les
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
xe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
vs
u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
really good battle here. felt B dont had a few forced wp that didnt end well imo. Plethora had some bars that didnt hit but several i liked.
close battle and will go either way based off preference.
v. plethora
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@Kill Spree caged polled the wrong person.
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
dope
got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
lmao dude i feel like I've seen this concept before but sam cassell being ugly gets me everyrtime
hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
wordy a bit forced here.
fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
not bad
axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
somethings off here
chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
missed
so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish
leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
na forced... killing joe boston here doe
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
cool i liked this
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
not much sting here decent though..
vs
it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
cool flip
u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
nope
so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
dope
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
cool
btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
this coulda been better imo ... the wording was off still like the idea
Quote Originally Posted by plethora View Post
if one of u bitches Lunge at me, im shooting the bazooka
so Step Klass & see big arms waiving like joe boston doing zumba
ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snooze
talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
cool
get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
dope
u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
cool idea ,.. fell flat for me though
notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
not baddd
well this was a cool battle.. broke it down both had some dope hits and some misses.... really close....
pleth opened dope but consistency wasn't there.. thought the same for BDOT but 18 lines is a bunch your do for some misses..
stand out lines from plethora the UFC line the Sam Cassell one and the observatory line... from bdot the opener was a cool flip the cobra and the elysian line i think was dope..
going with consistency
vote Bdot felt his punches connected more and had less misses... good battle.
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
Bro that tickle anus and tattoo line was literally wack as a bad fuck, I felt like I paid for sex wit a prostitute and couldn't even fit my dick in or something idk-, complete misses frfr but..
These lines I quoted were Dope, well thought out and well delivered. N honestly that coinstar punch would've been one of the best gun bars I've heard in a long time wit a better set up(something that referenced money). Overall very nice drop, 8.5/10 on a scale, with only those two misses.
V.s
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
The personal set up and the simian word play here was nice, as well as the rhyme scheme and attempted personal finish in the closing bar. 4/10 on a scale. The rest of you verse may have been decent versus lesser bars but pales in comparison to your opponents, like really in a skin tone battle to the darkest, you would've been Snow White to his Pocahantas or something idk.
V/Plethora
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Neither verse impressed me however, I felt Plethora came a little bit wittier with his punches so.... v/Plethora
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
vs
so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
Wow! I like the intensity each battler brought. Plethora had a few bars that didn't really connect well, I think overall he had the most inconsistent bars and didn't really hit like he could've with them. The Lie N Wait bar wasn't all that great and the Joe Boston sandwich wasn't really a hit on B Dot honestly. The bars I chose above were the hardest I thought the two put out. I think B Dot had the most hits and the better punches in this battle.
v/ B Dot
Pleth
u use a walking stick to get around, til i put it thru this geezers face
gonna see a Cain go right thru Lesnar that'll take u back to his ufc days
Cool wordplay usage and creative reference in finish setup couldve been better
got that Aliens name from looks, not being active handlin' ratchets
closest we seen to an Alien shootin during drill time was sam cassell in practice
Hes,ugly lol but shit anyone ugly motherfucker can be labeled as an Alien
hide in the back for the right time to attack, then beat him down
so when u see a nigga Lie in Wait, aint joe boston saying he's only 300 pounds
Im 225 but i didnt really like the reference with the lie in wait wordplay
fag came back around for textcee love ❤, from dudes thats brand new
so when you see Ink going down the middle of Lesnars chest, its not a tattoo
Thought the finisher was too predictable
axe thru B Dot throat til its pieces of corned beef, something gory
so once i cut open his head Anecdotal know im not making up stories
Np seemed bit forced
chrome in backpack. wont be Broke when i give a bag full of nickel-plateds
gonna hear loud bangs coming from the sack, like ur girl everytime i tickle anus
Lol no
so when his fam sees blood on B Lesnars shirt it'll cause anguish
leave red stains on BLT that ain't ketchup from a joe boston sandwich
Another weak reference for me i dont even like blts lol
i hang w/ niggas that'll put Dots in a box like candy & give this Nerd the .40
so it aint star gazing when the scope blows Dot up like griffith observatory
Dope af such a creative hit with the np
if we beef'n, u'll get that trigger noise cuz my boys armed like marines
all you'll hear is clickin sounds when it goes down.. thats a coinstar machine
Not feeling it
Bdot
it's clear u love to post gay wrestling bars, me? i fancy bitches often
ur girl thinks we're a pretty decent match, in bed she's always chanting this is awesome
Lmao nice flip
u approach gorgeous women and get denied, ur greeted with attitude
he butthurt cuz whenever acute tendonitis pain, she gets that repeatedly slapping dude
Not feeling the wordplay
so just admit ur a fucking loser, ur dirt poor with significant cash debt
bitch please ur family's estate has a barrenness even cobra wouldn't consider an asset
Rofl
knowp straight floored ur racist ass, ur white trash and an avid junkie
since pleth's a goofy wigga who thinks he's black, i'll pull the simian blast this monkey
Dope reference
btw ur forced wordplays suck, i hope this dumb/predictable lame quits
it's ironic u called urself plethora, cuz u always drop a shitload of unoriginal nameflips
Too simple
ur gbl finals verse was dull, tied with siq and then the voters snoozed
talmbout bazookas in a fitness theme, this hackneyed to learn his gunbars is overused
Cool wordplay
get right and pray to god for forgiveness, lose the ratchets and blades
trust me pleth someday ur going to find elysian, and realize ur a stupid faggot with aids
Lol good wp hit
u flopped in the latest cypher, i won't stop til this clever dork is wowed
shit the way u butchered all ur corny rebuttals, would even make dexter morgan proud
Couldve been displayed better
notti bodied u in a fl champ match, u don't want a candid talk with me
u sure emphasized some brutal ragdoll physics, cuz all of ur punches landed awkwardly
Nah
I liked pleths opener and that dot observatory line was dope af. Only lines that really stood out. Pleth overall just had wording issues that landed into misses. I felt bdot was more creative and also had some good humor factor.
V/b dot
Punchlines- B Dot Lesnar
Opener-Plethora
Creativity- B Dot Lesnar
wordplays- B Dot
Overall- B Dot
This is tough because both was great
I'll give to B DOT
Reasons: a Little more creative with worded compare to Pleth
he had a better overall his verse connected better. and funnier.