5 bars.....u know the rules,... no feeding, no Lettermaning...
Due date is Saturday 8th by 11:59pm, that should give u plenty of time to write a fire verse...This...IS ....My....Check
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5 bars.....u know the rules,... no feeding, no Lettermaning...
Due date is Saturday 8th by 11:59pm, that should give u plenty of time to write a fire verse...This...IS ....My....Check
No Lettermaning lol.. Check.
Let me know if u need the extension...i know u probably got an LLL verse to write as wellQuote:
Originally Posted by Networth
Yea thanks. Monday works better for me.. Puttin in OT at work.. Aint even wrote a concept yet. Good look.Quote:
Originally Posted by GrimmZReaper
Posting soon asap
Just @me when u ready....im good to post by nights end
Grimm u fake as fuck, don’t act like u know ya guns n spray stuff
Post battle if they call u hip, its cause I took everything from the waist up!!
Dump ya ashes from the Tre, cos that mouth runnin like u dope as hell
Keep blowin smoke and I’ll put this burner at my finger tips tryna smoke a tail!
Not the type thats bold, I’ll leave u outlined in chalk if u trace me
N nigga I would address the hoe in u, still wouldn’t show up to my place B!
After this post kill urself, battle sum1 u decide you’re better than
Im not telling don’t show, im just really hoping to read a suicide Letter man!
If u live then try again don’t at first quit, ill split ya shit on purpose
When I’m done puttin all this Red on Black, he’ll think I bit one of his verses!!
10 is too short but eh...
(May 18th FL cypher)
(June 7th vs Packed Graves in Wk1 LLL)Quote:
Originally Posted by Networth
You bootleg Letterman, double dippin that garbage and u lookin to cyphin with Grimm?Quote:
Originally Posted by Networth
Why search for the bang bro? when clearly Nets history's to go in that recycling Bin
So ur fat, recycled, got punked by Lesnar …..and that FL champ match was a Slam from start
I mean..with one man having that many poor traits…one would think u could hang with art
I heard fat boy gotta couple baby mamas w/ drama & it’s Gonna Get worse
Since now u got a pair of EXs AND this L on ya back…like everyone of your shirts
Don’t mention gunplay, like me & my shooter just chillin’... Comfy in the house
We waitin…hand in the waist while my dawg buck on the floor, im AL Bundy on the couch
If u aint got that teflon vest on, better shield ya chest with the next jawn or get laced cuzzo
Aint u aint Mystikal either, so don’t get ANAL bum, ....cover up or leave with ya face puzzled
- - - Updated - - -
last bar should say And U aint Mystikal.....
Upp .. Why ain't this open for votes, or is it?
Grimm u fake as fuck, don’t act like u know ya guns n spray stuff
Post battle if they call u hip, its cause I took everything from the waist up!!
-0/3 not feeling this one
Dump ya ashes from the Tre, cos that mouth runnin like u dope as hell
Keep blowin smoke and I’ll put this burner at my finger tips tryna smoke a tail!
-2/3 not hard hitting but kinda clever
Not the type thats bold, I’ll leave u outlined in chalk if u trace me
N nigga I would address the hoe in u, still wouldn’t show up to my place B!
-1/3 felt like this could of been worded better
After this post kill urself, battle sum1 u decide you’re better than
Im not telling don’t show, im just really hoping to read a suicide Letter man!
-0/3 this may be a reference to something im unaware of. either way this isnt a stinger
If u live then try again don’t at first quit, ill split ya shit on purpose
When I’m done puttin all this Red on Black, he’ll think I bit one of his verses!!
-1/3 light
4/15
vs
You bootleg Letterman, double dippin that garbage and u lookin to cyphin with Grimm?
Why search for the bang bro? when clearly Nets history's to go in that recycling Bin
-3/3 nice personal
So ur fat, recycled, got punked by Lesnar …..and that FL champ match was a Slam from start
I mean..with one man having that many poor traits…one would think u could hang with art
-0/3 didnt like the wording on this one.. started well then eh
I heard fat boy gotta couple baby mamas w/ drama & it’s Gonna Get worse
Since now u got a pair of EXs AND this L on ya back…like everyone of your shirts
1/3 this was light
Don’t mention gunplay, like me & my shooter just chillin’... Comfy in the house
We waitin…hand in the waist while my dawg buck on the floor, im AL Bundy on the couch
-2/3 lol good reference
If u aint got that teflon vest on, better shield ya chest with the next jawn or get laced cuzzo
Aint u aint Mystikal either, so don’t get ANAL bum, ....cover up or leave with ya face puzzled
0/3 not feeling the closer
6/15
v-grimmz reaper
Net
I didn't see anything that really stood out and deliver with some strength behind it. Many attempts but some where glancing blows as others were complete misses.
Not the type thats bold, I’ll leave u outlined in chalk if u trace me
N nigga I would address the hoe in u, still wouldn’t show up to my place B!
If u live then try again don’t at first quit, ill split ya shit on purpose
When I’m done puttin all this Red on Black, he’ll think I bit one of his verses!!
I didn't get these lines at all and that was bad. It's like you went the plain route with these when you had a great set up
Grimmz
You started strong but you kinda fell off towards the end. Your strongest lines were the opener I just wish that you kept it going. Staying on his size was probably the downfall here where you had an opportunity to get at something else and had a decent line with the shirt reference you drilled a hole where a hole was and that didn't outdo the previous line. The Al Bundy setup was a fail and the closer was disconnected. But you did have enough to win this
Vote Grimmz
Dump ya ashes from the Tre, cos that mouth runnin like u dope as hell
Keep blowin smoke and I’ll put this burner at my finger tips tryna smoke a tail!
After this post kill urself, battle sum1 u decide you’re better than
Im not telling don’t show, im just really hoping to read a suicide Letter man!
Them other bars could've been executed better..
Nobody perfect, but I know you're capable of making a impact in your punches.
Them other bars didn't quite hit hard enough. Substance there doe.
vs
You bootleg Letterman, double dippin that garbage and u lookin to cyphin with Grimm?
Why search for the bang bro? when clearly Nets history's to go in that recycling Bin
decent at best.. name plays on him kinda old.. Gotta get fresh concepts.
So ur fat, recycled, got punked by Lesnar …..and that FL champ match was a Slam from start
I mean..with one man having that many poor traits…one would think u could hang with art
nice execution
I heard fat boy gotta couple baby mamas w/ drama & it’s Gonna Get worse
Since now u got a pair of EXs AND this L on ya back…like everyone of your shirts
thats nice... lol
Don’t mention gunplay, like me & my shooter just chillin’... Comfy in the house
We waitin…hand in the waist while my dawg buck on the floor, im AL Bundy on the couch
Yoo thats that Elliot Ness flow right there! lol but this not a punch doe fam..
Last bar aint cut it for me, i got it.. but it had no impact.
V.Grimm.. better verse.
since this thread is basically over i'll explain what he meant by the bar...Quote:
Originally Posted by 143
I u read my verses, I usually highlight key words in red and my alias name on here is boyznblack,....so he's saying he'll put red ( blood) on black ( me)..like I do with my verses... decent punch but I think he forgot my screename is Grimm & not everyone knows im also BNB
If u live then try again don’t at first quit, ill split ya shit on purpose
When I’m done puttin all this Red on Black, he’ll think I bit one of his verses!!
vs
So ur fat, recycled, got punked by Lesnar …..and that FL champ match was a Slam from start
I mean..with one man having that many poor traits…one would think u could hang with art
battle was pretty like. good flips from Grimmz but one was a mad stinger. Net could of came more creative with a tone of different personals but he had one that was aight. overall gotta give it to G for a better verse.
v. Grimmz
Grim wins KO