WK02: Contendership Match (1-1) Smog vs. (1-1) Plot (OPEN FOR FEED)

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Regular Battle
Verses due NO DUE DATES*
Voting ends on NO DUE DATES*

Must check-in 24/48 hours for NO DUE DATES to take effect
*be reasonable

10-lines MAX Regular Battle
16-lines MAX Contendership and Championship Battle


You know the rules, if not, refer to the rule thread.

@Smog
@Plot

Check in good with 10

Sounds good

When I was young

I exposed my dick to ur mother, let it rise n fucked her, climaxed crazy in the bitches twat
After the action simmered I bounced.. long story short.. that’s how I created a little Plot.
I’ll beat the fuck out u faggot, smash u till ur swoll n look a lot different
Ur appearance’ll be mysterious, leavin ya fam puzzled like wait, when TF did Plot Thicken
Orange and porridge could be slanted to work, even if u were born in Iran, Kid
But u rhymed basic n Amish.. Maaan U can’t force that in ANY foreign Language
I use the 1-2 to try new things, n never lose sleep if im slayed that round
S’why I wouldn’t take that punch from Lay Back.. I’ll just drop u n lay back down
Triple L where comp is thick, n it’s a bitch to get by the ones with fags on their dick
So don’t worry bout losing to dr votes.. learning to dr’s ur ONLY hope to move on from this

Smog wins by No Show, Plot rage quits.

We're going to keep this open for feed.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Soule

He didn't vote on a single battle lol.

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It's partly to space it out so I don't have to do back to back mags lol. I did 1-2 earlier day, and I'll leave this open until maybe Friday, then I'll do the mag and have new battles up late Friday night.

Quote:

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Originally Posted by Wuxia

It's partly to space it out so I don't have to do back to back mags lol. I did 1-2 earlier day, and I'll leave this open until maybe Friday, then I'll do the mag and have new battles up late Friday night.

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We need battles open tonight, stop acting like ur busy with life… here I’ll leave feed



Cool verse bro, keep doing ur thing

I exposed my dick to ur mother, let it rise n fucked her, climaxed crazy in the bitches twat
After the action simmered I bounced.. long story short.. that’s how I created a little Plot.
There's a lot tied in here but unless the reader is familiar with story framework they might not get it. Fire.
I’ll beat the fuck out u faggot, smash u till ur swoll n look a lot different
Ur appearance’ll be mysterious, leavin ya fam puzzled like wait, when TF did Plot Thicken
Getting a bit repetitive, should have used this later, don't lean on nameplays two punches in a row if you can help it
Orange and porridge could be slanted to work, even if u were born in Iran, Kid
But u rhymed basic n Amish.. Maaan U can’t force that in ANY foreign Language
LOL, ok
I use the 1-2 to try new things, n never lose sleep if im slayed that round
S’why I wouldn’t take that punch from Lay Back.. I’ll just drop u n lay back down
decent
Triple L where comp is thick, n it’s a bitch to get by the ones with fags on their dick
So don’t worry bout losing to dr votes.. learning to dr’s ur ONLY hope to move on from this
not a fan of this

A pretty solid verse. I've seen you grow over time, you are almost there bro. Keep going, you will be a monster

This would have won regardless. Plot is a wuss. Good stuff