Bash Dat Ass (Bash Diss)

Intro
Dis goes out to any old nigga on RB,
Dats hatin on a new nigga on RB,
U know who u r,
(Bash)!!!!!!! (Dat)!!!!!! (Ass)!!!!!!

Verse 1
niggas keep trippin, I'm bout to start hittin,
niggas up in the crib where they livin,
then I'ma have they punk ass just skippin,
out of town cuz it's they ass that I was just whippin//
niggas gettin scared sayin i cant beleive it,
cuz I just left they punk ass just bleeding,
them the niggas I cant stand like I'm paraplegic,
u tryna avoid me u might as well get a lil more strategic//
y da fuck yall pussy niggas always hatin,
callin in ya right hand man like u was mastabatin,
I'ma shoot off ya flabs of fat like saturation,
I can see yall niggas is scared now I got u shakin//
I'ma Bash u punk bitch how u think dis dude gon learn,
how to improve my raps when u rub it in like Lubri Derm,
u already a hot mc now it's my turn,
to keep my rhymes comin out just like newer sperm//

Chorus
Comin wit shit hard enough to make computers crash,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
every time u say I'm makin up some newer trash,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
every chance I get to print ur raps to whipe my ass,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
and when B.R.E. see u gettin ready to haul ass,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//

Verse 2
Bash when I 1st came u was like nice drop,
u was really feelin me in da beginin so y stop,
is it cuz u started fallin in luv wit ridin my cock,
or dem B.R.E. niggas said u really like dis guy dog//
B.R.E. stands for Bitch Rappers Extreme,
yall nuthin but a bunch of fags chasin a dream,
yall only go at da niggas dats new on da scene,
cuz old rappers otha den yall is reighnin supreme//
NH and Zainy they is my mans,
while u dissed me they gave me support like they was my fans,
didnt I challenge u to a battle before Bash,
like I said in da chorus u went to haul ass//
yall niggas want some hot shit so u can scribble it in ya note pads,
yall pussies want me to put some shit dat'll make u say oh damn,
but I'm to busy fa dis cuz I'm goin place to place like a nomad,
so all yall punk niggas can join ur girl and start lickin on my gonads//

Chorus
Comin wit shit hard enough to make computers crash,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
every time u say I'm makin up some newer trash,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
every chance I get to print ur raps to whipe my ass,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//
and when B.R.E. see u gettin ready to haul ass,
I'm comin thru ready to Bash dat ass//

And dats it u punk mutha fuckas, next time "PLEEZ DONT BE HATIN"
fa all yall hatin ass niggas I had to "LeT Em KnOw"
Niggas tryna go at me jut cuz I'm "NEW IN DIS"
I got some advice fa yall niggas, "Watch Ya Words"

lol......i should close this THREAD for being so wack............
Bash is a superior lyricist then u.............
i think peeps on RB only hate on other peeps if they know they r better,
have a cry,,,,,,,,,lol

that was so wack
it seemed like u just tried to rhyme some words together
yo i can even sleep write better then that

^ Word. I thought the chorus thing was slightly amusing, but other than that this was madd basic, the rhyme scheme, the vocab, the flow, it just seemed rushed togetehr to me, keystyled even.

Elevation is the key, take some time to write and perfect a piece, then drop it, you'll find the final product to be waaaaaaaaaaaaaay better.

Peace!

im trying to follow rules and be nice but...
uuhhhh this is hard....
IT SUCKED!!!!!!!!
thats being nice.
with words like that, Everybody in B.R.E will eat you up.
elevate so that the diss would become effective.

this was ummh....lackin?

This cat wants Beef.............I'm a shut him up

Get off my D-I-C-K

Fuk it i aint wasting my time on this cat

there's nothing more really to say but.........

Kid, if you want respect and no hate.....

take what people are tellin' ya... can use it to ur advantage...

ur wack.... elevate.... u can only get better....

but don't try and start beef with a vet when ur a newbie.....

everyone on RB won't respect you........

these are words of wisdom.... take 'em

return the favor in my thread...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=52112