10 Lines. 1 line = 1 bar. No d/r votes, crew or hate.ETC
Verse due within 30 Minutes of your Check-in. So check
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10 Lines. 1 line = 1 bar. No d/r votes, crew or hate.ETC
Verse due within 30 Minutes of your Check-in. So check
in right when you read this.
im checkin in n ill post right afta u 1 like bout 10 min i need time to write stuff u post up first cause u wanted it im out 1
This is you Now :D
It’s Not Just a Couple Lines. Your wack and it applies to your whole-Verse
And what kinda Bitch calls someOne out. Then Wont Post-First..(bitch slapped)
Never Once Will a Man Defeat-me. So you must think you’re a Women
Fathered in this battle. Showed cuz I ‘son’ned-em
This Dicks Choked witta Condom, Soul’s Suffering from Writers-BLOCK
He stopped his Talk..cuz beating me is Impossible Like FINDING-PAC!!..
Your getting a Beat-Down. Like Minority’s FIGHTING COPS..(LoL)
This is where your Ryming Stops, “Lost Win” but your “Finding LOSS”…(DAMN)
Hunta’s Just the same as 4-Horney Girls, Seeing that He’s FOUR-TEEN(S)
And Like Morphine. I’m Dealing Losses cuz it Creates MORE-FIENS…
Now, after the Battle. Here’s you..:eek:
Merked.
my rhymes surpass n harass ur lyriks that look like a broken tv wit no contrast my barz will come at u in 3 like wat u see in broken glasses//
ill arterial dr. suess blood gases, his respitory systems not working so i start to pump him wit acid//
ur devoutly religious so i cross ya mind like jesus christ so im rulin mankind//
suicide is wat yall do after the posts come up for this battle, leave ya whole crew losin like when griffey left seattle//
twist ya spinal cord, embarrass ya ass n show ur record to the board,2 wins n 20 loses thats somethin to be adored//
stick my hand down ur throat and rip out ur vocal cord, now we don't have to listen to u wack rhymes in audio ne more//
drain ya blood n imbomb ya body, dr suess couldn't spit ill if he had hiv,ur rhymes r a lower part of the bourgeoisie//
come back for ur soul like a male banshee, hommie ur like a blind emcee u just can't see me
dr. suess betta go bak to his nursey rhymes riddles like da kat n da hat//
dis rap game is straight up combat, he couldn't beat me if he was in desert storm n he had fabulous on his bak//
1 uppin for votes
uppin for votes now yall every thing is ready lets get it jumpin ~1~ both rhymes r posted up lets go
hmmmm hard decision
here's how it went
flow:Soul
punches:tie
multies:Suess
vocab:Suess
dis barely goes to Suess fo real tight battle
1-0 suess etill uppin for votes yall lets get this shit goin ya kno wat i mean ~1~ im out............................................... ....
uppin for more votes yall.............................................. ................................
in my opinion soul won but hes in my crew so im not voting............................................ ..................
my fault score is 0-0 that kat don't have ova 100 posts ~1~ still uppin for votes yall come on..............................................
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Originally posted by posterboy520
in my opinion soul won but hes in my crew so im not voting............................................ ..................
i dont really give a Shit what you Think. Your in his Crew
and Backing him Up..Dont Sway..WTF!...herb
Oh and by the way POSTERBOY.
I MERKED YOUR FRIEND HERE. SO PLEEZ DONT TRY AND HELP HIM.
any vet or good batteler on this board Knows that i MERKED THIS KID's VERSE....No hate, but thats the truth
your verse wasnt bad, but it Needs work In my opinion.
kid u didn't merk shit nigga............................................. .................................................. ........
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UpPiNg fOr 5 POLL vOtEs To gEt My wIn oVeR WiTh...LoL
seen as tho cut-throats vote doesnt count, heres anotha vote fo seuss...
better verse overall, punches,multi's, word-play....