Doctor J Vs. X-Ecution

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no d.r.
no biting
no recycling
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WARNING: I WILL BE CHECKING ON WHO POST HERE

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BLIND POST.......BOTH DROPS IN 30 MIN......1

i mess up your vital organs and store them for an organ shortage/
I'll give your dick to a constipated asian, they're used to short-shit!/

i'll Leave u Scorched-Bro, Try-N-Win-it, i'll Leave u Fried-N-Shredded/
this kid Is Pathetic, Wit "Less Flavor" Than a Person Thats Diabetic/

A Bomb-Threat Created-and-Demonstrated For Mind-Stress/
Wit this bitch's Back Against The Wall Like a Spined-Chest/

Pull some Alfred hitchcock shit, so It'll be HARD WHEN PAIN FLOCKS/
I'm sure everyone thinks of u like the club scene in Iceland BARS JUST AINT HOT/

My lyrics like Bustin' a 9 I got you Duckin' the rhyme/
Punch through the Vest on your chest till your Sternum touches your SPINE!/

I’m A Rack-Up-Dis-Kid, "He Claim He Freestyle" ‘Cuz-Homos-Good-Wit-Fashion-Tips'/
Best Relax-Ur-Hips! "U Must Exercise Ya Butt Cheeks "Tha-Way-Ur-Ass-Gets-'Ripped'//
Check-It-Kid, My Verbal Techs-Will-Spit And Land Hard Punches Til I’ve Wrecked-My-Fists/
And I’m A Specialist, Cuz I'll Deck-This-Bitch Until He's Connected Only By His Neck-And-Dick//
I Infected-Sick And Injected-Ticks To Prove Ya Can’t Flow Wit Ya Neglected-Clique/
So I’m Gonna Project-A-Diss With So Many Intoxicated Flows, That It'll Leave U Left-In-Piss//
Without Lookin At Cha Verse-I’ll-Disperse-Words That’ll Leave U Emotionally Hurtin/
If Words Hurt Then Mine Will Disintegrate Ur Body So U Can Do Some Soul Searchin//
X I'll Fill Anthrax In A Syringe, And Stab The Needle In Ur Optical Lens, Then U’ll See Death/
Den I’ll Splatter Yo Lungs On Your Veins So Ur Illiterate Ass Can Bleed Breath//

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vote time........lets go kids.......vote away.....1

breakdown---
punches=doc
sustaiment=doc
flow=tie
metas=doc
origanality=x
vocab=x
creativity=doc
overall=doc........jus def had harder punches.thats all....nice battle peeps
hit this up.........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=82725

.|X took this|.
.|i give it to Doctor J for the minor wordplay|.
.|n consistency of flow|.
.|but X took this punch wise as usual|.
.|drop a fair one here|.
.| http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...threadid=84443 |.

.|i can't poll cus i'm at a friend house|.
.|i'll poll when i get home though|.

Thanx for da vote

uppin 4 votes(1)

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personally i thin x-ecution got dis!!!!!!

flow=X-Ecution
structure=X-Ecution
rythem=doctor J
word play=tie
punches X-Ecution
overall=X-Ecution

vote= X-Ecution

yo hit this up tell me what cha think vote for witch ever one ya want on dis but i'll tell ya's this pine-cone resign'd

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...665#post829665

sorry thats supose to be in there lol

my fault
and for got to vote.
but i told ya who i vote for

this match was even all the way except for the punches.....
doctor J gets my vote cuz his punches were harder...good shit by the both though...



GameTime...

Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat

anyways 1-1

uppin 4 votes(2)

yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle

^ bullshyt vote give a better explination..........if not ima get that removed im not acceptin no bs votexs.........1

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Originally posted by Doctor_J
Thats nice we should have said only people wit under 500 post can vote cuz theres 2 many herbz who look at cha stats and vote on dat

anyways 1-1

uppin 4 votes(2)

yo x check out i.r. bout cha friend bionicle

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i meant over 500 post

uppin i guess(3)

yea kid vote like dis for example -Brixton- post so post again

explain more though thats sumtin thing they have to learn x

uppin for votes(4)