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he drops first but ill probably drop soon
check in....1
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10 lines
he drops first but ill probably drop soon
check in....1
this is ma check in waitn on pac.................
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dog you think ya mr. big shot, bitch not ya probably a disc jock/
don't force me to make a pit stop and deliver the quick shots/
claimin that you can defeat PACASO MAC thats where the shit stops/
nigga i stay in front of the race, my shape is in tip top/
i'm in the zone but this dude better step into it /
X Ecution, please this hoe is gonna get executed/
but this nigga (me) is underated, please don't take me as a pric/
X ECUTION catch ya in the wrong spot at night...... merk you and take ya shit/
hey but please don't pick PACASO you don't want it wit him/
cause i said it before i'll have ya pickin shells up in front of ya crib/
ok dog post ya shit
i posted my part dog whas goin on Xecution i aint rushin ya dog but i wanna see the stats and yo part lets go pick up that pace
sry man i went out ma fault but heres ma shyt (new format again)
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I’m a pain fiend I rip flesh and eat spleens/
If your lyrics hold you together, I just ripped you from the seams/
ya lyrics are full of holes, battlin' me? you overzealous/
ya verses have so many gaps, it makes the mall of america jealous/
fuck An upset win, this verse is literally making you die/
getting clowned and you don't know why, like blind men with lazy eyes/
And his flow fuckin sucks, but it's his rhyming more so/
That style? Shit’s just a big waist like Kelly Price’s torso/
It wouldn't have mattered if u spit, your skills already saved me the energy bitch/
cause you Dropped it and fucked up, like autistics workin wit chemistry kits/
deffinately x on this....
the other guy was barable to read...
wasn't any enjoyment...lacked wordplay hard punches n all
x got this by comin harder...better punches/personals...
wordplay n all that goes to x...
ima say x takes this easily, heres my breakdown......
structure-tie
flow-x
vocab-tie
wordplay-x
punches-x
personals-tie
overall-x
props to the both of ya, but ima say x takes this.....
peace.......
time for the imfamous uppppppppppppppppennnnnn
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Xecution got this, both had okay flows but x came with the more witty punches and they hit harder then pacaso's disses--vote=x
peep one the battles in my sig please--tryin to end those shits-------out
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THIS IS THE REAL BATTLE NOT THE OTHER ONE
MY RETARDED BATTLE PARTNER DID THAT 1......STUPID.....1
when this is done lets battle again, nice battle dog, but i want another battle against you, you want to? think you can win again set it up
i dont do rematchs rite away u gotta wait n earn it............
myb get a win or two ...........then come to me...................
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Mac- decent shit, nothing really stood out...
but ya flow was ok... no hard punches really,
and ya wordplay was lackin a lil... just take
this shit and elevate...
X- nice flow, punches and multies... it wouldnt hurt
to use a few personals though dawgy... but overall,
you took this shit and ran like an opposum eatin shit....
nice.
can yall hit up my battle wit Chameleon with an honest vote:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...967#post837967
humor=tie
vocab=tie
wordplay=x ecutioner
punches=x ecutioner
personals=tie
overall=x ecutioner
good job!
vote= X