-KareLess- VS Uben. Sonned

Uben. Sonned's VERSE

i guess being as kareless at you are u dont mind if you lose/
I've seen the trouble you cause it aint ive noone the blues//
i think i kno who u are and shit gonna git started/
fuckin immagrint its about time you git deprated//
your ryhmes are wack u cant see the "picture" like you had broken glasses/
looks like sum one takin lessons cause you been to da token classes//
**cough cough** is that you coughin hmm i hear u weezin/
is it a sickness or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin//
cause i threw a few punches and diddnt even try/
you wanted to battle and when i replied i jus sighed//


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KareLess's VERSE

Sais U'r Poetic thats Pathetic..U'r lines need medicsand i aint clowning cuz your verse juss said-it
you suck Dicks lets jut forget-it..like sports? and playing with Balls, fuck i cant get off U'r Fetish
your Sig looks like Street Fighter's Ry-u...Foots on fire which makes it easier to Lite-You!!
My flows complex like Dr.seuss and your confused..read my Books then try to Bite Whoo's..
Ispit after you so my verse caught you from Behind and now this kid is Walking Funny
By now Dummy must be Pist and Biting Hard like Stale bread cuz U'r Droppin Crummy..
youv'e been Sonned - Uben. sonned..Now i'ma light my Victory as if the Cuban's Won
plus u'r prolly fatter then the American Idle and Big P son, so im'a juss call you Rubin-Pun
ok peace. One, wait i fucked your girlz Buns and your a fagget ass There, Now i'm Dun.

merked.

uppin for votes.

Hmmm...Uben Came Weak...Concepts Were Poor And No Real Hard Hittin Punches..

Kareless Came Nice...Nice Punches In There But Had Some Long Lines...Try And Shorten Them A Bit..

But Its Was 1-Sided...Kareless Took It Hands Down In All Aspects..

Vote - Kareless

wow.
what the fuck!!


13 VIEWS but 1 fuckin VOTE.....




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Fuck what you Heard. HAHAHAHAHAHAHAH
I'm KiLLa_Cali....By the Way Pleez Dont Ban Me..i Promise to Use Only this Name.

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any wayz..UpPiNg tHiS FuCkInG SlEpT On tHrEaD....

Vote goes to kareless

Punches-Kare
Struture-Kare
Flow-U but wasnt great i tell you that
Vocab-Kare
Multis-wasnt many but Kare
Personals-Kare
Overall-Kare

omg whats with this under the table shit yozlyrical you only vote for kareless serious i bet you dotn even read the forum stupid return the favor shit

wtf nigga i explained my reason 4 my vote your just upset that he won in his battle against you Kareless has skills its not my fault pz

i guess being as kareless at you are u dont mind if you lose/
I've seen the trouble you cause it aint ive noone the blues//
dont get the last line, first was an alright personal
i think i kno who u are and shit gonna git started/
fuckin immagrint its about time you git deprated//
ehhh
your ryhmes are wack u cant see the "picture" like you had broken glasses/
looks like sum one takin lessons cause you been to da token classes//
first was alright, second was weak
**cough cough** is that you coughin hmm i hear u weezin/
is it a sickness or is it from me givin you that lyrical beatin//
eh not feelin it
cause i threw a few punches and diddnt even try/
you wanted to battle and when i replied i jus sighed//
lol...ok, alright ending

Sais U'r Poetic thats Pathetic..U'r lines need medicsand i aint clowning cuz your verse juss said-it
you suck Dicks lets jut forget-it..like sports? and playing with Balls, fuck i cant get off U'r Fetish
blah, first was alright, second was weak
your Sig looks like Street Fighter's Ry-u...Foots on fire which makes it easier to Lite-You!!
My flows complex like Dr.seuss and your confused..read my Books then try to Bite Whoo's..
eh, shorten your lines...
Ispit after you so my verse caught you from Behind and now this kid is Walking Funny
By now Dummy must be Pist and Biting Hard like Stale bread cuz U'r Droppin Crummy..
youv'e been Sonned - Uben. sonned..Now i'ma light my Victory as if the Cuban's Won
i dont get the repetition, first line was good punch, nicely executed
plus u'r prolly fatter then the American Idle and Big P son, so im'a juss call you Rubin-Pun
ok peace. One, wait i fucked your girlz Buns and your a fagget ass There, Now i'm Dun.
elementary!!

last battle of yours was alot better...oh well

punches- K
meta's- K
multis- K -- lines too stretched though
personals- ehh, noone
flow- eh

Vote- Kareless --- not really a good battle but stay up...count my vote if you wish

yozlyrical i agree with you here but sometimes your reasoning is just fucked up and it makes you think..............

?????????????? how the boy has skills cant no one change that i feel hes beat every mc whos went against him i aint gonna front if i battled him i would vote he won cuz i kno hes sick like dat(sry 2 freepost in ya shit)

punches:kare
flow:kare
personals:none
metas:kare

this was a one sided battle easy to see that.....kare takes this shit

hit up the link in my sig so i can battle again...and ill return honest votes...pc

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Read rules... this wasnt explained - Trapt Wit

Kareless/ you had a decent flow with nice rhymes and gud voc., wordplay could be betta; your punches came thru hard and there was a lot of variation in your lines; I'd like to see more personals, cuz you didn't have so many: your structure was aight

Uben.Sonned/Your flow was a little off, you had gud voc. but your wordplay was weak; your punches were played I thought, they just didn't make sense; I didn't see any personals, you need to work on that; your structure was aight
Overall vote: Kareless
Retutn the favour on this man: http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116045

^^^you didnt POLL VOTE damn it.
POLL VOTE! PLEASE

This one goes to Kareless. Uben didnt have anything in his verse that was good except for the way he typed it. Other than that Kare had the better punches and personals. he had pretty good wordplay but he should add more multis in his flow. Uben needs to elevate a lot because his verse was below subpar, his punches were weak and they were'nt really directed so that took away from his personal. This was an easy one to vote on i give it to Kareless because he overall had the better verse.

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OPEN BATTLE(me vs. KO WARNING'S)
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116477