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Love the song...the beat is the shit...its the beat from the 2pac and Biggie track Eminem made....i mixed in the chorus and shit...it tells a story about what happened and peace we should be takin ...has a meaning..check it out and drop links...thanx...PEACE
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/my5t3rymusic.htm
^you post to much........ go give someone some (feedback... (peace)
ight i posted to ALOT...NOW UP MY SHIT
i dropped feed on this at another site.. its a cool track with just a couple little flaws man.. im upping it for you cuz you have replied to a lot of threads that i can see
peace
igh tthanx...UPPIN
jesus christ this is a nice track...UPPIN
this is a nice track.....well put together.....its jus that.....
you sound really really white....i guess its your speach.....
i dont really know what to say.....its good....but..to me...it wasn't too entertaining
Yahh, the accent is a lil' weird to me the way you accent the end of yer words but who cares that's just preference. You came nice on this track and i like were yer goin wit yer lyrics and flow. Good shit not just spittin a bunch of stuff that rhymes. You got good rhyme content.
Overall this drop was cool..................
feedback on one of my cuts, got 2 or 3 on the 1st page. 1
*please kill this beat if u are using it*
clicks....
yeah...the enunciation is your main problem
you know how to flow...delivery is good...but the way u say your words...OVER enunciate them
"Make Room for me" instead of "make room fa' me"
stuff like that...
but good shit nonetheless
.pz.
your delivery is coo.... your voice = classic whiteboy voice.... lyrics coo....... THIS AINT GRAMMER SCHOOL. this nigga been puttin his private school education in his raps..... from now on dont exagerate your words......... short and sweet... like alka said
LOLLLLLLLLLL....yall some igorant mothafuckas (<--hows that)...privatew school...LOLLLL... ight thanx for the feed apprciate it..