Homicide187 VS Take Notez

ite 10 bar max
ill spit first...
plz explain votes...

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ite chekk chekk.......

I kno ur gay, i dont needa 'take notez', i saw u "droppin bars" purposely, it wasnt 'misplaced soap', so u better 'pray, hope' that i wouldnt slit a 'gays-throat'/1

u gettin verbally 'messed-up-in-this-verse', 'left-up-in-a-herse', 'left-back-in-the-dirt', like ya momz 'left-u-after-birth', so now u behind, tryin to 'catch-up-n-it-hurts', Avatar lookin like u spilt Ketchup-on-ur-shirt'/2

i got 'chronic-spits', theres no 'toppin-it', cuz its "cause n effect", when i 'drop-a-spit', i 'drop-a-kid', u couldnt beat me if u 'mocked-my-shyt'/3

ill leave u "hangin by strings", call me Japetto, Ur avatar got me wondein if u gothic or ghetto/4

ill rip 'apart-ur-face', leave it as ugly as ur clothes, u like " i got dressed in the 'dark, ok?'", liar, u juss shop at kmart-u-gay, but this is RB, kmarts 'far-away'/5

I spit personals, u juss 'spittin-writtens', takin time away from the 'dicks-u-lickin', u claim ur not gay, but u look up to 'Richard-Simmons'/6

i dont need illity to battle u, so im 'stoopin', u must be 'stupid', actin 'foo-lish' thinkin u can beat me, u cant even spell 'exclusive'/7
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(his aim s/n is Xklussive)

ite.. there it is.. ur up kid

nice drop nigga i'lll vote when ya'll finished
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lol whurr that kid at???????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????????????????????????????????????????

i'll vote when u done, but vote on this link anyone its been open for days n we need votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=89707

Lol...IIght



Im 'Rant-in' ya WACK SHIT with 'Newtons' Of Madness-//-
Quite 'Rancid' wit spews that released to "Layce" Up this Mans Myth-//-
Ur Lacking Talents of "Opus Composures" so stay wit the LOW REP-//-
Ur "Guilty Concioused" with the SN "Homicide"..At Least Ur Admittin To Death!-//-
Im Concluding Early U'll Be Lackin THe "Bar" Wit Votes thatz MEASLY-//-
Im "Reaping" Wit Guns that'll Leave ya Dome "Proned" Where Ya FEET BE!-//-
Ur Attempts Is LIke Me Spittin My Capacity At A "50"% Version-//-
Ya Challenged "Rushed" ya Death Meet the funeral Homes and the "Dirged" Hymns-//-
U Get GUN CLAPS for Ur Tries not Noticin Ya "Chances" Oblique-//-
NIgga Stay WIt the "L's" U'll Have Betta "Luck" To CHALLENGE DEFEAT!!-//-


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ayo.. i got a vote before dis kid even posted... n that aint fair.. i dont want no d/r vote... so can sum1 (a mod) take away one vote from the poll.. thanx

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uppin.... come on folks......... dis is a hott batttle........... don sleep on it.........................

how do you get that pic on your sig and i'll vote?????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ??????????????

wtf dude just vote lmaoooo........................................... ...............
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i gotta give this to notes he just came out harder and seemed to want the win more

vocab-Notes
Wordplay-Notes
Struc-Notes
Punches-Homi

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^^^laughs at this clown explicit....doesnt know how to vote LOL

breakdown-

flow-deff homicide
punches-deff homicide
wordplay-how the fuck ex gonna say homicide didnt get this haha people man read the verses
creativity-homicide
fun to read-homicide

no hate on other cat though just the truth his verse was hott too

vote-homicide