e.coli (lyrical soliders) vs hit panik (hiv) with poll

aight cuz ignore the first thread

5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew, hate, or d/r votes

both verses due within 12 hours of ya check in..............try not to take all 12 hours to spit im tryin to get this over wit

ok ~checkin in ~ i won't have time in 24 hours so i'll post in 20 mins or somethin homie gl in the battle so hollaz peeps i'm out~1

Im Already On A Roll, Kid, Dont Make Me Even Begin To Start To Rock…
Like Slaves Robbin Cars, Ya Getting Hit With More Whips Then A Parking Lot……
Time To Defeat This Cat Who Hopes We Are Parallel, So Our Lines Never Meet…
Cause After Reading This…You Goin To Act Like Malignant Bugs, Dying To Flea….
Ya Lines Are Useless, Half Ya Flow Is A Waste And Pit-I-Ful.....
It Must Be Your Ritual To Fuck Beef, Cause Your flow Is Too Pre Dicked-A-Bull…..(his name is e.coli)
This Kid Need A New Style, Cause The One You Use Now? Kid You Played It Out……
E.Coli Couldnt Deliver Text Even If He Had His Own Paper Route.....
This Fake Lyrical Soldier In Every Thread, Lets See Who The Fuck Will Last……
Beating Me Is Like Masterbating On Treadmills, Its An Uphill Task…..
Like Jackin Off Wit No Arms, You Have No Chance Of beatin Me…..
Im Like a Lop Sided Lego, You Cant Stand A Piece Of Me………

i got to hand it to u being that whack takes serious dedication...
ya rhymes wouldnt be monitored closely if u were a crackhead on probation...
he uses big words...dont let them fool u this prick has no IQ..
yall should take note hit is a great example of what whackness can do to u....
the way im makin ya loser ass ride the pine i feel like ya coach....
i will make u RUN to my COCK and then kick ya ass AWAY like a ROACH....
hit panik merkin me is like a anorexic tryin to lose weight while takin creatine...
dumbass.....like a kid learning to count u get ya numbers mixed up..your really 17...
hit panik is lost like a blind kid wit no walkin stick u need to be directed....
i know ya crew is heated......your dirty ass is the reason the needle got infected......





explaination....... line 8..........hit's profile says he is 16 but he is 17..........check the profile

opener:tie- nice of both you guys
closer:tie- again nice
wordplay:tie
structure:tie
punches:hit panik
overall:hit panik


this was the closest battle i seen on RB in a while on RB, both you guys came very hard. hit panik just took it though, he had one or two punches that just outshone e colis. nice drop off both you guys.

peace,
no hate



honset votes would be appreciated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=91494

and

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...953#post903953

thanks for votin..............double 0seven i will hit up your links when i come back from b-ball practice...................................

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DAMN..............SOMEONE VOTE ON THIS BITCH...............

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leave a link or something and we will hit it up........just vote

this was a nice battle kna mean from both cats i liked da punches now for da breakdown...

like slaves robbing cars, ya getting hit with more whips than a parking lot/
very nice bar had me dying lol
too me that was prolly da only bar that actually stood out as creativity...

opener:panik
closer:panik lol
worth reading:both
worth battling:both
multi's:panik
creativity:e.coli

panik verse was worded better while e.coli's verse was aight, after reading both verses a couple of times my vote goes to panik kna mean shout out's to both emcees though holla

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to close to call but here gos


opener: both-really good guys
closer: Panik-man keep your shit flowing
wordplay: Panik- aiight dawg
structure:e.coli- not bad man
punches:panik-of course like i said keep it flowing
Overall:Panik-it was close but panik wins this time

this was a tight, close battle...
panik won though. he was better in everything except personals. props to both

-j six

Flow: HiT'PaNiK
Multies: HiT'PaNiK
Opener: tie
Finisher: tie
Structure: e.coli
Personals: HiT'PaNiK
Punchlines: HiT'PaNiK

Overall: HiT'PaNiK