"2 Minutes Long (Life Is)"

Rough draft for Mixtape...feedback and i'll return the favor...

Direct Link: "2 Minutes Long (Life Is)"
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/ke...blissmusic.htm

yay ya i like that shit u got a good rapping voice bruv. where u from and how old r u! d/w i aint no peedo!lol! yeh man i liked that pretty good chorus, i always find it hard to produce a good chorus so a lot of respect! theres a lot of fake rappers on this site and uze a real 1! speaking of fake check a battle between blunt mc and this dazir kid= listen to the dazir its in audio battles should b at the top, its the wackest shit uve ever heard in ya life trust! pz................................................ .

ight peepin now...beat is ok...not my feel but its ight...flow and del is ok...emotion is better ...lyrics are startin to get better...adlibs are off at parts...i cant even tell when the hook came in thogh..lol...the beat never switched up...overall this aint a bad trakc though...yo if u could peep back...thanx

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