Yo read this shit feel dis shit! (poetic version)

Yo im fallin away,
im lyricly sick no matter what they say,
im readin my own words,
and i got even myself commin back to thirds,
i dont mean to brag,
but wack mcee's should start wavin white flags,
but at the same time,
with all thats goin on in the world how am i still sopose to rhyme,
and still,
make shit that yall can feel,
if we all were to die today,
ever wonder what the people will say,
i would like the people to say that with my lyrics i didnt play,
and that my life was sick even when he wasnt at his best,
and that "DoubleD's soul will never be at rest",
and that "David's life went by way to fast",
"he should still be livin by the spell his rhymes cast",
and as i lay dead,
i hope everybody doest forget what i said,
THAT MY RHYMES ARE CANDY,
AND THAT IF YOU FEEL WHAT U READ THAT BRINGS UNDERSTANDING.

Aight aight holla back tell meh what yall think........

ERM............I KNOW WOT UR SAYIN BUT U SEE TOO CONTRADICT YOUSELF WEN UR SAYIN IF WE ALL DIE - WOT WILL THEY SAY AND YOU SHOULD PLAY WITH UR LYRICS MATE.