check out my songs please critique me

yo here are some songs i made i would just like some feedback
let me know what you think and i will tell you what i think of your shit just leave a link
peace

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/5/fe...ellermusic.htm

come on it dont hurt you to check out my shit, i would really appreciate it. thank you
peace

i feel you. give me some feedback on my shit and ill return the favor.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...threadid=98957

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yo check this guy out seriously he has some nice work going down....no reason for this to be splet considering all the garabage thats not...

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awesome man really nice
check my stuff out

what ur studio set up

digital 8 track and my computer thanks for checking my stuff. give me a link and i will for sure give you some input, thanks.

digital 8 track??lol
so takin' it back to the future huh?...i feel ya brah...


peepin Girls ar Sluts...funyy ass sample in intro...
im feelin the verses, i think u try to sound to much like established recording artists...

"whutever!"lmaaaao, i like your train of thought tho fully son...
u a funny nugga...that alone gets me interested in ya work...
ima sucker for creativity...man, on second thought im liking this verse more 'n more...each listen, i heat funnier shit...i like how u setup this shit akwardly...no real direction in the audio, but its still hot!

holla back bro, peep some FiL shit...if you like listening to hiphop..
lol, iLL shit tho, keep blessin us wit audios...
oNE...

leave me a link and i will check your stuff out, thanks for the input and appreciation for sluts
peace

lol.........I like the girls are sluts song....kinda eminemish.....funny intro.....lyrics was pretty good.......production was nice....I think Ima make a song about why I think girls are sluts,lol....like to see my chicago fam doin things like this....nice job

listenin to I AM...


beat is crazy.....your flow is hot....and delivery was on point....i like the versatility in your flow....lyrics is decent, i was feelin it.....i give this a 7/10...this wasn't awful but wasn't perfect....but it was good ya heard.....keep doin ya thing...OnE




I'm Ghost...

thanks, if you all got links to your stuff leave them and i will check them out
peace

anyone else check my stuff..............i dont bite.. leave me a link and i will check your stuff out
peace

i'm loving your style...


you are yourself... good tracks my man

ya got something go on man


so i guess your staying active now on RB..col cool

thanks man..............im glad someone can enjoy it........ha ha
peace

i liked " I am" for it made me want to rap along lol

they were good drops

my ex, even thou it was sappy i liked that one alot

and the girls are sluts, well it was funny as hell! lol

got some good stuff!

~Tera~
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