Hot Battle (RaNdoMz Vs Urge4Mo')

so I Got New Shizz 4 You Boi/ Betta Be Listen Mayn/cause I Be Tha Taughest Competetor U Have Eva Had/you Been Seen By Me/in My Hood Im Tha One Who Is Respected Highly/u Probably In Da Bottom Of Tha Food Group Gettin Knifed,b/haha Diss Yo Boi Urge4mo' Haha!

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I aint got beef witt this kid I thought I'd make that clear//
But his rhymes are stupid, like a bitch spillin' a beer.

My punches'll have you spinnin' like I was "HURRICANE-CARTER"// (boxer)
Battling me will leave you breathless, I thought you MIGHT-OF-BEEN-SMARTER.

Randomz Had Nice Punches... Nice Structure... thought about it a bit

Urge4Mo... Was All Fuckin Over Tha Place.. No Real Punches.. To Much Self Glory.. Not A Real BAttle Verse... **Future Reference... hit enter after a line... make it more decipherable...

V/ Randomz

U Also Got Some Hot Shizz In It 2 Like Tha Part Wit R Kelly And My Moma And My Family

aight i cant vote but imma give u my feedback
Randomz:
I'll break through yur house door With R. Kelly//
While I rape yur mom, he rapes the kids in yur family.
^^Lol aight,good punch
After this battle you wont have an "Urge4Mo'"// (his name)
Cuz my rhymes have you shook left CoNvUlSiNg on the flo'.
^^good endin
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Urge4mo:
in My Hood Im Tha One Who Is Respected Highly/u Probably In Da Bottom Of Tha Food Group Gettin Knifed,b/
^^aight
but too much filler linez g,u fill yo structue wif a lot of repz(same wordz)
my vote would go fo' Randomz in thiz one

When I Said Sumtin It Was To help You.. Dont Be A Hater And Talk Shit...
People Vote On It.. You Go into Bitchslapped Or Into Front Lines And Vote On Peoples battles.. Then They Will RTF(Return The Favour)...

I need Feedback please.. I learn From My Mistakes. I Would Like To Know Where My Battle Goes Wrong.. Thx.. Only Vote If You Can Pole Yur Votes.. Urge4Mo' And I Will Return The Favour.. B eZ

one sided battle.

Randomz-not bad. good flow and structure. sum hot multies. ur pretty good at this. work more on ur punches. u topped him but work on makin ur punches hit harder. work on personals. keep elevatin on wordplay. overall decent verse.

Urge-structure was horrible. ur structure fucked up ur flow. didn't feel like u hit him at all. mostly self glory and threats. elevate on ur disses. read sum battles first. then try again. keep writin. u still got quite a bit of work to do.

v//Randomz for overall better verse (better punches, structure, flow, and wordplay)

RTF and check my topical battle in sig. pz.

Uppin.. Lets Get This Voted On.. I Always RTF...

ONLY VOTE IF YOU CAN POLE.. AND LEAVE COMMENTS.. PEACE..

i personaly think randomz won this battle cuz he had a betta flow nd punches wereas the other guy had de opposite.keep elevatin.i think even randomz shud dedicate more lines to dissin the other person rather than glorifyin himself,but he won this 1.

Uppin.. More Votes on This Battle..

Leave Comments I'll RTF And So Will urge4mo'

B eZ

i vote randoms for best wordplay punches and personals good work both of u but randomz came off harder in this battle that urge

Uppin 4 Votes.. Need 1 More.. We Will RTF.. Check out This Ill Battle And Vote.. B eZee

Uppin 4 Votes..

We Will RTF.. B eZ

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Originally Posted by Influence

Randomz won. He had punches and a readable structure and flow. Urge4mo' had nothing. If you say this isn't a qualified vote, look at it. Randomz wins with actual punches, Urge just self glorified, nothing really more. Yep, that's about it.

v/RaNdoMz

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I TOTALLY AGREE I COULD'NT HAVE SAID IT BETTER MYSELF