you must have not seen my other OMs then.But thanks for the feedback though
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you must have not seen my other OMs then.But thanks for the feedback though
i'll check em out...... basically i've already seen them... you already know who i am but you just don't know about this name ha1 but hit my drop up, i'll appreciate it
actually I don't know who you are for real if I did I would know but if you want to tell me PM me cuz I don't know who you are
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I was really feeling this piece. The Imagery was one of the best aspects of it, really painted a picture, had nice emotion, deep storyline, and you both approached the topic in a good way. The Internal rhymes really helped the piece flow, and the vocab was good for rizzo's part, va's could've been upped a little. Nice drop from the both of you.
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well rizzo it was good false imaginary but you could of made me see it more it was dull from the beginnig then it doe a lil decent work on structure but i see how its going
VA-yours was aight i liked it but you could of came a lil bit harder on imaginary to but yall sem like a good crew so keep up and keep dropen word
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this was a tight drop, i liked the lay out of this peice, rhymes were really good from both of you, flow was very smooth through out the whole peice, really feelin this one, topic was interesting and i enjoyed reading it...i liked every part of this drop, it kept me interested with the wrods you chose to make this peice come together as one hell of a drop, complexity was here in sum places but i'm not complanaining, nicely thoguht out bothn of you, keep it up homiez, overall 9.5/10, keep it up
-Skribble
check out my drop, the right way thanks
this was a tight drop, i liked the lay out of this peice, rhymes were really good from both of you, flow was very smooth through out the whole peice, really feelin this one, topic was interesting and i enjoyed reading it...i liked every part of this drop, it kept me interested with the wrods you chose to make this peice come together as one hell of a drop, complexity was here in sum places but i'm not complaining, nicely thought out, both of you, keep it up homiez, overall 9.5/10,
-Skribble
check out my drop, the right way thanks
damn i psted it twice
thanks for the feedback homie