na i think demons version goes better
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na i think demons version goes better
you mean my version? lol ...damnit demon you're stealing my thunder
Lol yer yours/demons version makes a better read...
Next time i post here it will be a vote :) weneva that is...
MOUSE
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
^Solid attempt at a nameplay the concept was very original, but the wording killed it. With frsh wording this punch is killer.
As for your other lines, I wasn't feeling them. This verse was very inconsistent and I don't see why you posted so early. You have a good amount of time to drop and unless you won't be able to post later or your going to drop dope I don't see why you wouldn't take advantadge of the time. I know your capable of a lot more man.
OV Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
^Eh. This was cool but, I didn't like it too much because I don't see how he was flirting from the quotes you posted..lol You forced the quotes into a punch but I guess this was ok.
Well, I've seen you drop a lot better man. This verse seemed extremely half-assed. The only reason I'm voting for you is because I felt the rest of your verse was better than the rest of mouses.
V//OV
Everybody keeps sayin why i dropped so early lol........me and him agredd to drop by twelve midnight......thats why.....
M.O.U.S.E. came with a dope opening punch but the rest was blah.
O.V. Dose was much more consistent throughout, with better rhyming structure.
Vote: O.V. Dose
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
decent but played as hell
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
forced more than fisting a virgin
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
that was just gay
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
No
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
Hell no
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Lmao!
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
meh, i used wordplay like this b4 so it's kinda played
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
NO
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
na
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
very bad wording but nice concept
well, both of you had a few good lines but then would follow it up with somethin filler or played. Mouse stop tryin so damn hard your forcin the shit outta all your concepts. keep it simple
v/ Ov dose
Mouse
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
^You tried but it wasn't the best shit. And the rest of your verse sucked.
Vs
O.V Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
^Dope. Mouse = Owned.
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
^Nice wordplay.
V/ O.V Dose for a more concistent verse and wayyy harder punches.
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
vs.
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
mouse you came real weak. your opener was the only quotable, and it wasn't even that good. work on wording and more doper/wittier concepts. ov, pretty dope verse. you could also work on wording, but you got this good. i liked the FCC line alot. good shit and nice drop.
v/ o.v. dose
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wtf why mouse aint banned yet? he bit meks :mad:
^^^^^^^WHAT THE HELL U TALKIN BOUT I NEVA BITE WHAT THE FUCK.........MAN GET OUTTA HERE.......i rememba sittin here and writin the whole thing so shut that up lol.....
Aines set it up right...speak no english? Spanish i guess ill post
Mouse is uno and like my name................it comes Over Dose
(Eh.)
Overdosed on your own conceit retards i will surpass
You can roll in Tu-Dors but still be the First C.L.-Ass
(Forced HELLA)
Underated by XXL standards.....Rays Pissed and i feel it
So ill give um a M cause at least he makes the age limit
(Eh. Horrid Wording.)
Your concepts are like skinny niggas liftin with adrenaline rush
The constant repitition like most say......will only get you cut
(Naw.)
I see you posted links to your song mixin words wit no hesitation
Ill add a LESS...to help out the front of the fortunate foundation
(Naw.)
vs. OV Dose
Mouse is tryin to ride my dick thats why im hurtin the bastard
Kid you must have a death wish...the way you flirt with disaster
(Not Really.)
Hittin him with a mickey mouse club, kid knows im viscious
Last time ya saw Disney i was beatin you this battle isnt any diffrent
(Ight. Forced.)
Get it? i didnt think so..........face it you stink ho
You couldnt make people wave at you if you hosted a game of bingo
(Cheesy.)
I think you should take some time-out, ya raps is that dirty
The F.C.C. will censer ya verse.............its FILLED with bad wording
(Hah. Ight.)
This newbs too stupid to compete, use his bad grammar as evidence
Yeah, ya represents.......every battle you've ever had with veterans
(Naw.)
/v OV Dose. He got this easy. Had the better lines basically. F.C.C line won it for him. Not a great battle. Pz.
lol.. its so obvious you bit.. you battled meks.. he used the line.. then you used it in another battle.. rofl.. hahaQuote:
Originally Posted by M.O.U.S.E.
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Originally Posted by WTF MAN
Nigga check every motha fuckin battle ive been in......get aines lol.......i dont bite period.......oh yea and didnt meks vote on this shit ON THE FIRST PAGE........if i bit him he woulda said somethin stupid fuck.........man get ya dick ridin ass out of here wit tha shit......and if it was some how a conicidence i could understand but i dont bite....so shut ya motha fuckin mouth u no talent.....net gangsta......prest ova the internet cause its my lover ass nigga....
lol... net gangsta? how am i acting gangsta faggit.. lol.. but relax your self fag face.. im just saying i thought you bit... dont get a heart attack now.. lmfao..
no talent? I'll rape you..