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Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
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Good Luck to you both
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
I'd say let's go 10...seems that what everyone else is doing. Not in the mood to go anymore...
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Quote:
Originally Posted by Cyph
Its nuffin for Cyph To have the Goons hop outta dem Vans
(Yawn)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Checc son
Links will be up but I'm doing this of my sidekick so bare wit me mods I will post my v.s when I get to
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur verses have more out-of-place lines, than a damn US map got
I stay 'loggin'-in 2 ya lady friend, more than I do w/ my damn laptop
[/QUOTE]
Bravo!
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
Gotcha
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
no
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
meh
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
ok i guess :/
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
cool
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
na
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
wackity
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
no punch
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
meh
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
blah blah blah
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
rhyme? NO
v/Lyrical_Maniac
Easy
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
vsssss
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
Best line vs best line didn't like anythin else, seen check disses to much lately so gonna go w/ Cyph
V// Cyph
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
LM
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
^^^NO..2 PLAYED
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
^^NO
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
^^^MEH
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
^^^NO LOL
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
^^THIS DIDNT RYHME AT ALL.....HORRIBLE VERSE
CYPH
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
^^^LOL OK
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
^^MEH
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
^^^NAH
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
^^OK
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
^^NO
V/CYPH...EASILY
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
vs
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
v/lyrical
ugh this battle was blah as hell, all that played ass shit in cyph's lines cost it for him and the closer didnt even rhyme....lyrical had a bunch of attempts that didnt hit hard, those 2 quotes werent even good i just needed to at least break it down somehow but w/e do better next time
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
Vs.
Nothing major
Not worth breaking down...it's obvious that Maniac had a somewhat better verse than Cyph...most of Cyph's shit really didn't hit hard, soft, or nothing...simple yet easy win for Maniac...
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
nah weak
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
weak as well
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
wack
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
good setup bad punch
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
wtf nope
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
played ass fuck
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
weak
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
meh ok
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
weak
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
lol played though
v-Cyph
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
vs
nothing
LOL @ using a defeet line and a mike tyson line. Also ya last bar aint rhyme shotta
v/ Lyrical Maniac
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Good battle on 1 side
Punches waz hitten on 1 side LM waz the only person wit consistent punches Cyph ya verse waz choppy and went all downhill ya needed better setups and better wordings Multis goes to LM to flow goes to LM and wordplay Goes to LM also
Pretty much a 1 sided battle for LM
v/LM
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
those were alright..first was kinda stretched but still..other kid had nothing rreally
edit wrong person
v/ lm
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
no
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
meh
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
played
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
needed better wording
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
played
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
wow no
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
no
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
filler
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
doesnt even rhyme, plus played
V/ Lyrical_Manic
although you both came played and wack.
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
good concept, but stretched...
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
meh.
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
ok.
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
ok.
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
ok finisher
vs.
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
no.
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
nah...
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
ok.
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
no.
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
meh k.
*Very weak on Cyph's part, didnt like wording nor structure, and when i read, you have the concepts, but no wording...once you get better wordin you will bstr8; but good battle from you none-the less...
V/LM
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
wow major fuk up there
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
nop
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
nop
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
nop
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
fuck no
no punches whatsoever stretched weak.. my suggestion read LLL battles n look at urs.
Ur verses have more out-of-place lines, than a damn US map got
I stay 'loggin'-in 2 ya lady friend, more than I do w/ my damn laptop
mo
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
no
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
best of the battle but still weak man
(No Homo)
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
meh
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
nah
v/cyph better evrything
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
LM- Well...the opener was ok...3rd bar was decent...and 5th bar was ok...pretty ok verse, solid enough I mean. You have the basics down, now be meaner when you punch at him. Cool for your first battle.
Cyph- The computer line was decent, but that's all you really had, not bad for such low post ocunt I guess and you're not an alias obviously, soo good effort, you need to work a bit on some of your wording and your punches though.
v/LM
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
vs.
nothing
cyph had played concepts thru out his verse...he had the usage of punches but they werent as effective as he coulda made 'em...seemed pretty one sided since lyrical maniac had at least 1 good line and nothing much else that effected his stand out, that one good bar gave him the advance in this battle...
v/ LM
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Cyph, go and redo all your votes or you will be booted from the League.
If you want a reason, quoting other peoples votes into your post is unacceptable.
So be quick.
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
nah famo
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
decentish
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
str8
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
I like this
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
Nope
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
nah maybe the next one you'll throw a punch...
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
stick to fl
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
omg no
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
waccck
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
No
v/Lyrical_Maniac
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
fuck it this a short vote coz time is short.
vote lyrical maniac
cyph had wordplays i was using years ago.so LM had more originality and bettewr flow
bye
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
^^^no at this opener
U just a NoWeight who feels that his name/status is so fuckn immense
However, I'm guilty of battlin' a dumb fuck who never puts in-no-cence
^^^okay
Taking it mild for this child, I know that I'm not known just as of yet
Ur flow delivery is so poor, dat da minute u 'checked' u were in debt
^^^okay
I'm crawling to this victory...it's 2 easy...no need 4 even baby steps
Always find Cyph-er at da bottom...lik da search forum, his rec n rep
^^^no
Lemme giv dis L.ess L.egitimate L.yricist his 1st loss up in this 0-0 J-R.
Got 2 b 'nuts' 2 think u'll beat me, oops, bitch ass don't no where they are
^^^no this closers wack
vs
it took dude 2weeks ta pre-write for da god
.............and thats how he came 2week
choppin at my ankles, is the only way u leave wit Da-feet
^^^no wack opener/ played
Please.. A Maniac dont compare to a physco-yoh
when i saw it was him,
..................i thought dam,this better news then a Geico call
^^^okay
and wats this talk about lady friends, no hoe would wanna do ya
last time he had a bitch on his laptop
...........................he was watchin porn on his portable computer
^^^decent
but yo flow wont cuz it, hes the question, im the answer
..............................he spits the Flu and i deliver the cancer
^^^nah
this dude a never get a deal, and i would keep writen
but i found out he did more biten then tyson did holiefield
^^^no
V/lyrical_maniac....this was a pretty weak one...cyph had one okay line the rest was no..Lm had a stronger verse atleast he had attempts with more some punchs and better nameplays
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
Ur entire rap skills I can't deCYPHer, ur not someone ever that I would fear
Da only time u n ya Goons will hop outta Vans, is running from me out ya'll foot-gear
vs.
Not Much I seen.
V.LM...
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Re: Week 9 - Lyrical_Maniac (0 - 0) Vs Cyph (0 - 0)
14 - 4 to Lyrical Maniac & Winner.
Lyrical Maniac Wins (1 - 0)
Cyph Booted*
*Quoting voters critiques into your votes.